@Nie-Huaisang-is-lost-in-the-stars

January 10, 2020

Do you not like him that way anymore?

well my feelings are fading slightly but i still don't want to hurt him

Then tell him what you said to us basically. Like, "So I like this girl and she doesn't know, but here's the thing. I know that we are in a relationship, but I don't feel the same way about you as I once did. I'm sorry, but I feel that things are no longer going to work out between us." or something like that.

@V01DtheFae

January 10, 2020

Do you not like him that way anymore?

well my feelings are fading slightly but i still don't want to hurt him

Then tell him what you said to us basically. Like, "So I like this girl and she doesn't know, but here's the thing. I know that we are in a relationship, but I don't feel the same way about you as I once did. I'm sorry, but I feel that things are no longer going to work out between us." or something like that.

~~hes's a bit handsy too~~

@Nie-Huaisang-is-lost-in-the-stars

January 10, 2020

~~Bring pepper spray~~

@Elder-God-Whisper

January 10, 2020

My screenwriting teacher is gonna get gay shit whether he likes it or not

nice

Mood

huge mood

Honestly, I'd do the same. That's also probably what will happen in my college creative writing course.

@Bre_is_sick_of_school

January 10, 2020

i like this girl and she doesn't know but on the other hand i have a boyfriend and i don't know how to put him down gently

I would say, "here's the thing I don't feel the same way about you as I once did. I'm sorry, but I feel that things are no longer going to work out between us."
I just shortened @Nie-Huaisang-is-lost-in-the-stars response.

@Bre_is_sick_of_school

January 10, 2020

Hey humans … and aliens I am writing a story that I am actually going to finish I got the first chapter and a little bit of the second tell me what you guys think….
Chapter 1

amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) walked out of the bathroom and her best friend ran up to her.
“Hey, amy (the most wonderful woman in the world),” said Jill
“Hey, Jill,” she said,
“you wanted to talk to me?” Jill asked
“Yeah,” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) said
Lately, amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) has had some weird things that she not sure is right. amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) started to walk to her room.
“Are you going to tell me what you wanted to talk about,” Jill said walking behind her.
Jill has been amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)’s best friend since first or second grade. Since the day they meet they have told each other everything, almost. Recently amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) has having some weird feelings and dreams. amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) final realized she had almost run into the wall near her room, but she turned just in time.
“amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) are you ok because you almost ran into a wall?” Jill asked
“I almost always run into a wall,” she said, ready to shut the on her friend then she thought better of it.
“And yeah I am fine,” she said.
“no, you are not,” Jill said walking into amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)’s room.
amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) walked in behind Jill, “Ok I will tell you” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) said closing the door behind her, “you know the new girl?”
“The one with short hair and it is a light purple?” Jill asked
“Yes!” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) said then turned red
“Emily is her name amy (the most wonderful woman in the world),” she said then Jill noticed amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) turning even bright red.
“so that’s what you wanted to tell me about,” Jill said while making fun of amy (the most wonderful woman in the world).
“No isn’t!” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) said then go an even darker red, “thing is the dreams I have had strange dreams lately.”
“so how d- “Jill started
amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)’s father poked his head in amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)'s room and said, “Girls the war has ended!”
“What?!” both girls screamed at the same time.

Chapter 2
“What kingdom won?” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) asked worriedly.
“Anngan” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)’s dad said, “Jill you need to home now!”
“WHAT?!” Jill screamed
“Shhhhh,” amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)’s dad said, “the Anngas do not know you are here, yes I know you girls were going to have
a sleepover but now something has happened so pack up, Jill and please go home before more start arriving.”
“Yes sir,” Jill said.
amy (the most wonderful woman in the world)’s Father left; amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) turned to Jill and said, “this must bad!”
amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) helped Jill shove her crap back into Jill’s butterfly bag.

@Elder-God-Whisper

January 10, 2020

Ok, number one thing I saw just skimming over it, you use the word "said" way too much. That's one of the biggest things for any writer.

@Bre_is_sick_of_school

January 10, 2020

Ok, number one thing I saw just skimming over it, you use the word "said" way too much. That's one of the biggest things for any writer.

this is just a rough draft, but other than that…

@RainClouds_Itachi_

January 10, 2020

ok so i know you said it's a rough draft, but the dialogue seems pretty stiff
it doesn't seem natural 'nd all that, although i assume you're gonna fix that anyway so-

it's pretty short, but kinda interesting!

_{'nother lil nitpick tho, weird way to deliver news of a WAR ending. cuz yanno,,, it's war, not the ending of a soccer game.}

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January 10, 2020

Y’all heard someone say “No hetero” today.

@Moxie

January 10, 2020

Hell yeah

@Simon-Says

January 10, 2020

My friend and I say that literally all the time 😂

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January 10, 2020

ALSO about the story,
It seems interesting, I’d like to know more about the world.
Like, I’d like to know more about the world before getting thrown into the conflict. The whole thing’s kinda stiff as well.
Finally, grammar stuff- start a new paragraph every time the
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