@ShadeStar
"2018," Wendi responded, "It was 2018."
"2018," Wendi responded, "It was 2018."
"What month. and it was 2018 when we left too so dont worry"
(What month is it currently for them?)
(uhh maybe May? does that work?)
(Yeah it does.)
"I think it was March or maybe April. I was with my tribe and then I wasn't," Wendi teared up, "I'm so scared."
"Hey, hey its ok. Your with us and we can keep you safe" Alex said going to the girls side wondering if she should give her a hug or not
"I've heard that before," Wendi backed away, "You're going to hurt me."
"No we wont hurt you I promise" (Is it ok if i get your advice on something?)
(Sure what?)
"How do I know that?" Wendi continued to back away.
(Its a school advanced lit lab project and i need to know which one to turn in) "Do you know what is the most binding of swears in ancient greek mythology? its the swear on the river styx. That will bind you to the oath and if you break it you will die"
(Well what are the options?)
"And why are you telling me this?" Wendi hadn't heard this before.
"Because I swear on the river styx that I, we will do you no harm" Alex said and thunder rumbled
(Its a horror fiction writing thing. Here's the first one: Skin freezing crystallizing, eyes drying and bloody. Hooks with meat and hair hanging. Finger-less hands and nailless fingers littered the shelves. Everything cold, unforgiving in the green basement. All memorabilia or souvenirs of time out of town. Operation table covered in blood with a young girl laying bound,dissected upon it. Only a few hours ago she was laughing, screaming, begging. The pale girl at the entrance turned and went through the kitchen, hallway. Into the bathroom, washing off the blood. Walking to the living room she said to her parents, “Did we have to kill her? She was nice”)
Wendi slightly jumped at the loud thunder, but she felt a wave of reassurance come over her, "Oh."
(second one: There are things in the dark, things that you can never see. You will only hear murmurs in the still air “bewhere” .They lurk in the hall, under the bed, in the closet, and behind the curtain. You can check under your bed with a light but all you will see is black tendrils recoiling from the illumination. Lay in your bed, not opening your eyes, for fear of what might be there. You wait to fall asleep; all limbs under the covers. Sleep will not keep them at bay and you know it isn’t nice to keep them waiting.)
"I also swear on the River Styx that I won't harm you," Tealle promised. After she had finished the sentence, thunder rumbled in the background.
(Hello!)
(I like the first one!)
(And hi! I didn't know how to make Tealle get in the conversation until just now :P)
(I like the first one!)
(ok. I also have to illustrate it which will be fun. My grandmother compared it to Stephen Kings' writing in a good way and im very proud)
(I can see why she'd compare it, it's amazing!!!! :D )
(Okay so the first one was like major creepy and I'm honestly really wondering what lead up to this, but it was really good. And the second one reinforces the whole idea of to be scared of the dark, you build on a primitive fear that almost everyone has. Personally I think you should do the first one since the second one has kind of been done over and over again. That and I really like the first one. So there's my input. But if you have to illustrate it go with the second one it will be so much easier for you, if easy is what you want.)
(Thank you so much!)
(I couldn't have put it better, @ShadeStar!)
(Okay so the first one was like major creepy and I'm honestly really wondering what lead up to this, but it was really good. And the second one reinforces the whole idea of to be scared of the dark, you build on a primitive fear that almost everyone has. Personally I think you should do the first one since the second one has kind of been done over and over again. That and I really like the first one. So there's my input. But if you have to illustrate it go with the second one it will be so much easier for you, if easy is what you want.)
(I actually like the first one better and easy is not what im going for. and thank you)
(No problem. Glad I could help!)
(That was a really well put reasoning, nothing lead up to that i just watch a crap ton of creepy stuff. and in my friend group we are all different 'deities' and so im Satan but im not really mean or evil or anything)
//omg i thought i was going to pee myself those were both good idek what they were for
(Sounds good, if anything it adds to the creepy factor. Also it's like undisputed that I'm the Slytherin in my group soo…)
(Hello my fellow Slytherin)
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