forum Speak Notebookians about your horrible villains!(or antagonists)

Started April 24, 2019 by @Darkblossom group

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My antagonist for the story I'm currently working on is named Crystrell (but normally goes by Crys [Chris])
Anyway, she shows up a bit after my protagonist (Jade) and becomes friends with the resident cinnamon roll, Starry.
COMPLETELY COINCIDENTALLY, shortly after she gets there, Starry starts becoming Sad Boi™ and yet another character's (chronic) disease starts worsening yayyyy
That character happens to die as well-
So Crys killed one character and hecked up another, while pretending to be ~°•nice•°~
Not as diabolical as some of you guys's, but she does like knives so that's cool

So my villains consist of:

• A manipulative, violent jock who see people as puppets and pawns

• An entitled, two-faced, perverted girl who is extremely obsessed with a gay guy and bullies anyone she views as immoral (mostly other girls)

• A vengeful ghost that tries to drag her son to heaven

• A cult leader that obsessed with kitsunes

• A gold-digging, abusive, cruel waste of space that basically abuses anyone to get ahead, including his family

• A yandere werecat that possessed his stepson to torment him and kill all his loved ones because he "split" up him and the boy's mother (by that I mean calling the police)

• An apathetic misanthropic woman who basically just screw over about people to get rich and live comfortably

Also here are some my anti-villains(They most end up being redeemed)

• A shy yet short-tempered albino delinquent girl she's an underling of the leader of the school gang

• A street-smart, refined school gang leader who's not apart of this system

• An energetic boy who's dangerously protective of his younger, trans sister

• An angry jock pissed at the MMC of the arc for previously bullying him

• A vampire bounty hunter hungry for bad boy-kun's blood

• A yandere fairy desperate for any socialization, due to him being exiled

• A homesick mermaid that has to use to turn back to normal

• An ex that's been ghosting bad boy-kun

• A cultist imouto trying to kill her brother

• A cynical hitman trying to kill his brother

I have some villains from my different OC worlds that I would love to share with you guys in a quick summary.

Binding wall: Rin Kuro. <- This bitch, after Zuri (My Kenyan home girl) starts a secret revolution within the Academy, snitches her plans to the very person Zuri didn't want to find out, The headmistress Miss Byrne. This goddamn sneaky, racist traitor decides, "y'know what, my life is more important than the lives of some irrelevant kids, Imma sacrifice their's for my own." Throughout the entirety of the story, this JAPANESE THOT keeps eluding to the idea that, because Zuri has dark skin, that means she is by her standard 'lower' then her and less intelligent. EXCUSE ME FCKER! Honestly though, Rin gets her Just Desserts in Osaka when Zuri defeats her, after Rin killed her best friend Chime with her samurai sword….. Despite being my own character……God I fcking hate Rin…..

Creekmouth: Daniel Smith. Unlike Rin (Who I just loathe with every bone in my body for being a racist turd) Daniel is horrible for a different reason. He's creepy and stares you down, making you feel unsafe just from a single glance. He's armed with a cultist dagger and uses it to stab people right through the heart, and take their blood and smear it on the ground for rituals. He speaks with diction, and he enunciates every word that comes out of his mouth…. almost as if he wants you to think their the last you'll hear.

Tigerlily: Icari. He's an angel that believes that the worlds chaos and hectic-ness has lead to more evil than good, and he seeks to purify the land of all abnormalities. He has powerful eagle wings and uses light magic to turn creatures into stone statues, killing them. This guy might look innocent enough but I can assure you he's out to destroy.

Lucida: Jackie. This arsehat is responsible for the capture of the Gifted, Ugandan child (Who has high autism) Tuma Eriyo, who can create any animal he so desires out of his mind. Hired by the government, she is payed to capture this child and bring him back for experimentation. There is this cool fight scene though, where she and Tuma are on a moving passenger train, and Tuma keeps creating dangerous animals for her to take care of.. so its like….

Jackie- Kicks train compartment doors down and loads pistol "Alright you little shit… come out where ever you ar-"

Tuma- Yeets a Python at her from behind a chair

Jackie- "Jesus Christ!!"

I don't know…. Hope you liked my villians….. I hate them with a passion!

Bye (＾▽＾) - Sunny

My character isn't really a villain, but she ain't the nicest person in the whole world, either.
She was crowned the queen of a huge country at only ten years old, after both of her parents were murdered by wizards and witches. When she was 14, a young wizard training in the capital became friends with her, and she trusted him a lot. He was in love with her, but she didn't feel the same way. He was angry and he cursed her into submission, leaving her pregnant with a child she didn't want…. Yeah. Basically, her life has been destroyed by mages..

So, after she dumps the aforementioned child on a mercenary who had been serving in her army, she outlaws the practice of magic with a penalty of life in jail (though that quickly escalated to public execution, because the jails filled up so quickly….)

Yeah. She's not nice, but her life hasn't exactly been sunshine and roses. And I'd like to think that readers will be able to sympathize with how she reacts to the cards she's been dealt…

— L.C.

It does sound like she's had it pretty rough, I can't blame her for feeling vengeful about the whole situation. I'm kind of intrigued how the mercenary deals with a little kid, that also sounds like an interesting storyline XD

Favourite villains of mine: Sicarius, Puppeteer
Least favourite (personality wise): Forge and Qarinah
Villains I'm legit afraid of: The Union, Vimmensius and Cult, Dr Alsberg

Villains I either can't help but relate to but feel sorry for: Killjoy, Marionette, Tungsten, Cyanide, Blizten
Anti-villains/blurry alignment: Moriah, Blitzen, Cannibal, Ivan