forum I'll critique characters! I will hopefully respond quickly!

Started February 27, 2019 by Anonymous author

tune

Could you please look at this family trying to overthrow a government for me?

Can you look over my smol?

he's one of the main characters of my story, theres not much info but ill add more :)

You could say this is my first fully formed character, and I want to make sure I'm getting the details of how she would act with age and her disorders. If you could give some pointers that would be great!