forum Sliding into the roleplay forums

Started February 23, 2018 by @_sleeby_rat_

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(I actually have to go to bed soon, so see you and the others tomorrow hopefully)

(ok, see ya)

(hello)

(why good morning)

(mornin')

(helloo)

(ayy)

(hi again)

(yo)

(lol I finally got around to writing the opening scene of my novel and I'm so freaking happy)

(nice! That can be one of the hardest parts, I've found XD)

(yeah, I've been putting it off for weeks lol. I've been kind of afraid to write Asura's character because I was afraid I'd butcher him completely lmao)

(lol and did it go to your satisfaction?)

(nice! that's really awesome!)

(sort of? I wanted to introduce him as this loud, angry demon person, but so far he's a quiet, sophisticated rich-looking man.)

(pfff I'm sure he'll show his true colors eventually XD)

(haha yeah. He's currently robbing a convenience store whoops)

(but he's doing it quietly)

(haha sounds like the best way to start a story ^^)

(haha, thanks. I'm probably going to post it in the critiques forum once I finish the first page lol)

(cool! Will you let me know when you do? I'd love to see it if that's all right)

(same here please?)

(lol okay. It's not very good though, just so you're aware. I'm the worst at writing and it takes me a really long time to produce something that's actually good)

(here you go: https://www.notebook.ai/forum/sharing-critiques/yo-come-critique-this-lit-opening-scene)

(Don't worry about that! I'm sure it's great and I'd love to read it ^^)

(Oooh! yay!)

(haha thank you)

(ok hang on lemme write down what I think on that thread)

(hi hello I'm back)