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Started January 18, 2019 by @Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

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My most cool universe thing is that the galaxy in Addar revolves around a double star.
And I LOVE magic!

I think dragons being exploitable for resources is all most humans need as an excuse.
Do the humans know that dragons were created by gods?

My most cool universe thing is that the galaxy in Addar revolves around a double star.
And I LOVE magic!

Now that's straight-up amazing!

Me too! I'm pretty good when it comes to kinks…

Phrasing

(Let me rephrase that… XD)
I can help too! I'm pretty good at ironing out kinks.

I laughed way harder than I should have at this whole exchange

Thank.

XD

I think dragons being exploitable for resources is all most humans need as an excuse.
Do the humans know that dragons were created by gods?

That's the problem… The answer is tentatively yes. But the gods are so morally gray, and don't interfere directly very much (aside from creation, and then a very small magic system sort of, that has more to do with advanced abilities and small miracles than gods striking someone down.) But another thing is that there's reincarnation, not heaven and hell, so I feel like since punishment isn't permanent (just for the next life), it might be more reasonable to wrong the gods

Oh, I think I may have an idea of how to fix that now:
People know they were created by these 2 gods, but a widely held perception is that it was to somehow punish mankind for their wrongs, and that dragons are vengeful. Something like that. Still needs work…

I see.
Still. Having the humans try to kill the dragons for resources is enough!

Oh, I think I may have an idea of how to fix that now:
People know they were created by these 2 gods, but a widely held perception is that it was to somehow punish mankind for their wrongs, and that dragons are vengeful. Something like that. Still needs work…

That works!

Yeah, like resources is a good side to it, but it's not good enough for the organization that literally wants them wiped off the face of the earth…

Yeah, like resources is a good side to it, but it's not good enough for the organization that literally wants them wiped off the face of the earth…

Ohhh!

Yeah, should've brought that up to begin with, but I forgot.

wow… That's complicated.. But I think you have it handled nicely!

Thank you! I'm doing my best!

:D

Problem. What should I end a female fantasy name with besides a?

Problem. What should I end a female fantasy name with besides a?

Use an i

E. Y. I. O. U. S.

So what's up, Dom?
How's the story?

Pretty well. I’m having a great time doing character development in Rp.
I have a lot of things on the burner though.

Any letter.

Thx guys!

So what's up, Dom?
How's the story?

Pretty well. I’m having a great time doing character development in Rp.
I have a lot of things on the burner though.

Things like what?
You willing to explain them, or would you rather not?

I am more than willing to ramble on forever.

Then by all means go ahead.
Unless that was sarcasm, then… I dunno…

Nah. Not sarcasm. Ask me a specific question so I don’t start in the middle of everything.

I second that notion!! I am bored as heck here!

Magic system?

My magic’s are pretty simple. They have hard rules that would be easy to understand if you could experience them, but not, in a book as well. Most sum down to power is taken from the person. In Althalos, the more you train, the more magic you can use with less power taken from your body. (Like in the beginning 1 piece of life = 1 power. Train to make 1 life = 2 power.) In Addar, it’s emotional energy that turns to pure energy that can be used in different ways. (Mostly attack with anger.) Then once they are able to access it, they have the power and it reflects the power of the emotion. They have to learn to access it through.

I see. Makes sense!

Nice!

Anyways I have changed the names of my main females in Althalos. Aria is now Arenna, Siry might become Saia.