forum Valencia's Arrows (Open 6/8) COME JOIN! WE HAVE COOKIES!!

Started December 17, 2018 by @StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder

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Liam looked up and met his sisters gaze. Understanding the hidden message he smiled and looked at Kaisa "no thanks you, I am a little tired so I'll go back with Ava." He replied

"Well I'm ready to go see this place," Zanna said excitedly pulling her notebook out and turning to a fresh page.

Kaisa drew her eyebrows together. "Oh, okay. Right well, ready yourselves for your first sight of Valencia's Capital City!" The door opened and the Outsiders caught their first look of the city.

Ari gazed at the Capital with a neutral expression, but her green eyes blazed with anger. Somewhere in Valencia, possibly in this very city, people were deciding who to drag her brother and numerous others here and do…well, they did something to them, and it couldn't be anything good. Griffin had come back completely mute and more prone to fits of random sadness, and Ari's heart had ached for him. That wasn't something that happened because of jet lag. Thankfully, the ScarTechs had been able to hack her a spot on the ship. She could purchase a bow when she got there, and she had a pistol and knives on her at the moment. Ari knew there were other Amber Arrows on the boat, but she didn't quite want to say anything to them yet. Griffin stood mere feet away, and Ari had her scarf pulled up over her face and a borrowed hoodie over her head so he didn't recognize her.

Ava clutched her laptop. She reached into her coat pocket and fingered something. She would probably finish it here. She smiled. "Are y-you ready T-Tenley?" She asked with a slight smile on her face.

She nodded and looked at Ava "well keep in touch via Comms. I'll be sure to give as much detail as possible." She responded, standing close to her

Ava nodded. She gave Tenely back her ear piece. "T-this should a-allow me t-to hear b-both ends of the c-conversation." Ava explained. "A-and I-I can talk to you e-e-easier."

Tenley nodded and smiled. "Anything private you want to tell me, just message me using the armband computer I gave you."

(Your intro is good and all but the ScarTechs cant do anything inside Valencia. So no weapons would be waiting for her)

(Ah, gotcha. I'll edit.)

(Hey I'm kinda confused because I don't know who Ari is, or Griffin, and it's an airship, not a boat.)

Nevermind, I found the template, sorry.

(My example:
Sophie swam through the thick bushes, still looking for her buddy Roze who lost herself in the forest. She pushed through, finally making it to the other side, sliding out the bushes while landing on the ground with a loud thud. She picked herself up and brushed her bleeding face with her hand, and began to walk around.
“Roze? Where are you?” She began to grow sour, knowing that this might be a waste of her time. “Come on out Roze, I don’t have all day…”
She dug through the other bushes eventually finding a trail of raw steak pieces. Aha! Found you! She followed the path with extreme caution, just in case she found another wolf. She eventually found a tree, it had two raw steaks infront of it, and underneath the branches, was a red wolf. Sophie ran up to the wolf and picked it up.
“You idiot, don’t run away again…” Sophie laughed off her fear, petting Roze.
Roze smiled and cuddled up against Sophie’s chest. “I’m sorry…”

Yeah that’s it.)

Ava looked at Kaisa. She was worried about her ratting them out even though she had said what she had risked. "T-Tenely?" Ava asked. "I-If you can place t-this on K-Kaisa." Ava said she she ruffled through her bag. She pulled out a small white circular chip. There was a green blinking light in the middle of it. "I-It's a tracking d-device." She explained. "So if she t-tries to s-sell us out or she g-gets f-found out, we kn-know where she is."

(That's awesome! You can join but dont make an Amber arrow, we have too many. Making a Valencian is preferred but not necessary)

Tenley nodded "of course. Does it have a microchip with audio?" She asked

Ava nodded. "It should p-probably be p-placed where she c-can't see it. It will stop b-blinking when p-placed." She explained.

"I was thinking her jackets underside?"

"T-that sounds good." Ava said nodding her head. "Make sure s-she d-doesn't notice."

"Of course, keep in touch?" She asked and went to go stand with the others as the hovercraft came to get them

Ava nodded her head. She waved goodbye to Tenely and the others. If she didn't have to do anything at the quarters she would probably try too finish them.

Kaisa led the way to a second hovertram and climbed aboard. "This is actually a great way for you to see the city, it's an absolutely beautiful place." Kaisa's tone didn't quite match her words, and she mentally cursed at herself for letting the city's beauty be spoiled because of what she knew. After all, the city wasn't at fault, just the people. She walked to the front and typed in the address for the new facility, and then took her seat with the others].

Tenley and Liam walked over to the windows and leaned against them.

(I'm lecturing this as slight tomorrowland type)

Ava got on the hovercraft to go to the quarters. 'I wish I could of talked to Kaisa.' She thought. 'Nah. I probably of stuttered more and barely gotten a word out.' She thought as she mentally cursed herself. She fiddled the pieces in her pocket. She smiled. She was so close to finishing them.