forum Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!
Started by @CopperQueen
tune

people_alt 39 followers

@CopperQueen

WAIT WHAT IF
LUNOS DOESN'T TELL THEM ABOUT THE KILL THE HUMAN THING
AND THEY GET BACK
LUNOS AND THE TWINS GET INTO A BIG FIGHT THE BOY JUST SNAPS AND ATTEMPTS TO KILL THE HUMAN RIGHT THEN AND THERE
BUT SOMEONE ELSE TAKES THE HIT AND ARE LIKE "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!"
AND HE SAYS "WHAT HE HAS BEEN FAILING TO DO FOR THE PAST MONTH!"

@CopperQueen

AND A PHYSICAL FIGHT BREAKS OUT AND LUNOS TRIES TO HELP GERANIUM BUT SHE PUSHES HIM OFF HER AND GIVES HIM A GLARE AND ATTEMPTS TO TAKE THEM DOWN THEMSELVES SO HE GOES TO TERIMAN BUT SHE KEEPS TURNING SO HE CAN'T BE BEHIND THEIR BACK, CAUSING HER TO GET HIT MORE

@CopperQueen

GERANIUM GOES UP AGAINST LUNOS SISTER TO TRY AND DO ONE AT A TIME AND HITS HER WITH SOME KIND OF MAGIC THAT PARALIZES HER ARM BUT SHE NEEDS HER ARM FOR BALANCE AND CONTROL OF HERS SO SHE ACCIDENTALLY SHOOTS OFF GERANIUMS PROSTETHIC LEG OFF AND THERES A MUTUAL MOMENT OF PANIC WHEN EVERYONE LOOKS AT EACHOTHER AND TRY AND REMEMBER IF IT'S HER LEFT OR RIGHT LEG THAT'S REAL

@CopperQueen

GERANIUM GOES UP AGAINST LUNOS SISTER TO TRY AND DO ONE AT A TIME AND HITS HER WITH SOME KIND OF MAGIC THAT PARALIZES HER ARM BUT SHE NEEDS HER ARM FOR BALANCE AND CONTROL OF HERS SO SHE ACCIDENTALLY SHOOTS OFF GERANIUMS PROSTETHIC LEG OFF AND THERES A MUTUAL MOMENT OF PANIC WHEN EVERYONE LOOKS AT EACHOTHER AND TRY AND REMEMBER IF IT'S HER LEFT OR RIGHT LEG THAT'S REAL

OMG and the only person who immediatly knows she's alright is Terimane
Because she has it memorized
Yet she knows Geranium isn't good at fighting without balance
So she tackles Lunos brother into him and lifts her up to help her

@CopperQueen

Concept: Lunos brother is totally pissed at him and Lunos says something about wishing he was the brother that died and the brother just feels so damn guilty and he wants to talk to the group about it but he can't choose who to talk to because it's either

A witch
Or
A colorhair

And he does not want to make the mistake Lunos did where he started liking the human but on the other hand… Witches are unatural, right? He can't talk to those they're… No.

Deleted user

YES!
What if we have a merchant who travels with them for a bit, end up as the actual Villain? Or maybe Lunos's uncle?

@CopperQueen

I think that this is kind of witches + allies against the world, we don't really need a specific figure of the hate. Although I live for the betrayal trope. Maybe the magmaids leak their information and they get jumped?

@CopperQueen

Yes the mastermind is a pretty magmermaid rouge who's trying to supply the entire group, wich the original magmermaid is a part of

@Huxly

Hey, I just had an idea. It might not be that good of an idea but when I think of Fae I usually think of fairy folk ('cause I'm pretty sure that's what it means??) But usually fairies have wings so maybe Lunos doesn't have wings because they were ripped off (so were his siblings) because this is a sign of treason/ banishment in his culture. But this is only done in his culture so not many others know about it. And that's why the group doesn't question the lack of his wings much. =P

Deleted user

Hm… I thought Lunos was supposed to be part of a noble family, at least that was what Lex was talking to me aout. I have no idea if they wrote it here.

@Huxly

Hm… I thought Lunos was supposed to be part of a noble family, at least that was what Lex was talking to me aout. I have no idea if they wrote it here.

Probably. I'm bad at remembering

@Huxly

Same here…

I feel bad for stalking this chat and the only thing I say is "I think that's a good idea," and "Hello."

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

I don't say anything most of the time, I just kinda hang out here. Also, I got a new charger for my computer so hopefully I can actually create that magmaid concept sketch that I was working on, then I can be actually useful for like three minutes before disappearing again

@Huxly

I don't say anything most of the time, I just kinda hang out here. Also, I got a new charger for my computer so hopefully I can actually create that magmaid concept sketch that I was working on, then I can be actually useful for like three minutes before disappearing again

lol