(Okay…. So you could have them racing towards some type of finish line and depending on what happens next either have them pass it, fall short, or like jolt awake as if it was a dream. Dreams are always a great way to start. Or situational experiences that people could easily relate to seeing as a major point in life. It works better if you don't complete the start all the way and wait until the end to wrap it up. Keeps the reader intrigued and shit. If the goal seems unachievable have whatever your using keep getting further away, until they finally reach it. Or have them miss consistently until the end…. that's all I got right now.)
"Kidnapped by my sister and she won't let her go. Ryan's having a mental breakdown, you have to help."
(I can use some of that I think… Thanks)
"Kidnapped by my sister and she won't let her go. Ryan's having a mental breakdown, you have to help."
"Okay, okay. I'll do whatever you need me to,"
(You're welcome. I tried.)
(Do you want an inspiring music video as your prize? Lol)
Lillian let out a sigh once Darren had left. She walked in to the living room and pulled out a book that was laying around. She didn't mind this, a little alone time never hurt anyone after all.
(Nah, I got finals to study for. Ugh, one of them I'm 90% sure the entire class isn't ready for. So why we're getting it now? I have no clue.)
A little alone time never hurt and she hardly ever got it so…
"Great! Unfortunately, I don't think I can go back down there. Nearly died the first time, I ain't doing it a second."
FREEDOM! Lol, nah she would just spend it unwinding and sorting through her thoughts. Like she normally did.
"That's okay, I got it," he shivered a little and was replaced by Shaxx who looked just as sickly and worn down as Cooper the same dark spot on his skin marking his dying body. If a demon could blush, he would be.
"Yeah, we need to take care of that ASAP."
"Sorry," He grumbled. "I don't mean to worry her so much," he frowned, "I'll be back if I need Darren's help," he pulled his robe over the mark so Nami wouldn't see evidence of his truss with a human and shimmered down. "Oh my lady, where are you, your highness,"
"Goddammit, let me out of here!" "Never!" "Ugh." It was pretty hard to miss the Queen and her copy arguing with Belle in the throne next to her.
Shaxx walked in and the moment he saw the queen, he knelt down on his knee, showing his unwavering loyalty and respect. "Your majesty,"
She smiled warmly when she saw him. "Ah, Shaxx, what a lovely surprise. What brings you here." "E I swear to fucking God, I'm going to kill you when I get back."
"I apologize for my interrupting your business here but I have a request," As the prince, he had the right to make those honorably.
Lillian let out a long sigh as she started smiling, these past few months had been up and down. But se=he had enjoyed them nonetheless. Everyone had graduated and now had college to worry about, Belle and Ryan were married, Cooper was on the brink of death…. Okay that one was bad, but it was getting fixed. She was making sure of that.
(I think jacks went to bed)
(…Probably. Either that or she's showering, but it's way too late for that.)
(No she always goes to bed around this time. I would complain about her just leaving without a goodnight but I do it all the time so)
(Yeah…. So do I now lol.)
(We should stop that, it makes me sad)
(Okay. From now on we'll all say night. Because we're a FAMILY)
(yeah! I only say night to my brother in my family tho– WERE CLOSER THAN THAT C'MON!)
(Lol. I've only written 164 words and I don't want to continue…)