forum Welcome to Altir City! OOC Chat

Started November 15, 2018 by @InstaOnly

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Faraneer is the nicer one, Mylnorr is more of a decision maker, and Kidairn is an asshole… they're like the power puff girls! But instead of Kidairn being a lovable asshole like buttercup, he's just an asshole.

Pft, sounds like me and my friends.
But, I'm the asshole.

lol

Lunos is justt chilling in the corner and observing the weird people.

Lunos is what I wound be doing in this situation.

Aaron is sitting in a chair watching over the weird people.

Gotta remember, right now Faraneer is a nervous wreck and trying to figure things out. When he gets control, as mentioned, it is usually to keep watch while the other heads rest
That or with Nirvana who he actually is pretty relaxed with

Kirdairn, can be a complete asshole, only one who really doesn't suffer from his 'asshole nature' is Nirvana

Mylnorr is leader and indeed decision maker. He could be considered the eldest of the heads, with Kirdairn being 'middle child', and finally Faraneer as a 'young' sibling
Over their long years alive, it is always Mylnorr who decides what they are to do

Yeet

I'm crying. I've had this idea for a month now and I just had to write it out. These aren't characters.
https://www.notebook.ai/my/documents/71376/edit

I don't believe you can share documents yet, it just makes a new untitled document when you try to click it. You can copy and paste the text to the chat if you still want to share it though.

Oh right! I'll do that.

Dia scanned the battle field for signs of her sister. The battle field was red. Red with fire, red with blood and red with the sun leaving the sky. It would be dark soon. "Claire!" She yelled as she looked around the battle field. She heard a groan near by. Probably a wounded soldier. They would probably die in a few minutes. She pulled her eyes off the field. She had to help them. She searched around. There. A woman was laying under a tree. She rushed over to her. "Are you OK? Where are you hurt?" She asked taking off her mask. As Dia reached into her bag to get some bandages or pain killers she heard a the soldier speak. "D-dia?" The soldier groaned. Dia snapped her head back. "Claire?" She said, her voice wavering slightly. Claire made another groan. She was shot in the chest. Not in the heart. If she had been shot there she would of died in seconds. "No. No. No no no no no." Dia said grabbing on to Claire. Clarie winced as Dia grabbed her. "Y-your alive. G-good." Claire stuttered, smiling. "I'll get help." Dia said standing up to go get a medical team. Claire grabbed Dia's pant leg. "Dia. There not going to be able to help. Please stay." Claire pleaded. "I don't want to be alone, Dia." Dia looked down at her sister. She knew she was right but she didn't want her to go. She knelt back down next to her. "Okay. I'll stay." She said. Claire smiled. "I love you." Claire said looking up at Dia with tears in her eyes. Dia held back a sob. "I love you too." Dia said as Claire closed her eyes.
(I'm not quite done yet but I needed to share this.)

Shoot, that's some good writing right there! I always love a scene that seems like it'll pull on some heart strings in the final product. Some of my characters have to die for the plot, but I still haven't gotten around to actually writing a death….

Oh, I have the opposite problem. I want to kill off all of my characters.

I get way too much enjoyment out of torturing my characters ._.

Same!

lol

Well, I mean, I have fun because it's for my story and I know the big picture. I just haven't gotten around to actually writing the death's down. My story doesn't have 'plot armor' for my heroes, so I have to be careful with how the plot goes to spare some and kill some with out raising questions why the side character died and not the hero right in front of the killer.

There's not much good killing a character would do in my story… perhaps once I develop all the characters and the plot more, I can torture some characters, but until then I don't know why I would kill a character.

Oof. Also now I'm wondering how all of your characters would react to the full trio I have. Because usually I have Aaron, Corru, and Jack but got rid of the other two because Aaron would ignore everyone else unless I were to introduce them later or something.

You should! you only have one character in right now.

Question for everyone. Who else has a character who was experimented on?

Depends on which character, as I have a couple

I have my little fluffy dog character named Quest. He was a part of dog fights made for the rich to bet on until the whole thing got shut down when a losing better ratted the group out, having injuries dealt with or simply be 'improved' with tech so he could keep fighting. Now he lives with one of my other characters, and though he loves going to do errands like grabbing the newspaper for people he's skittish around big dogs. His new owner is careful to not make Quest feel like he's being forced into anything.
Also okay than I might add them when I have the chance, they don't really take physical form often since their kind of ghost characters. So I'll just put a short personality and appearance thing here in a sec.

Let's see!
Lunos was held in captivty and studied for a while…

Apparently a sec became an hour…. anyways!
Aaron- You guys have already seen how he can be difficult and unstable at times. He's actually the nicest(or at least the most approachable) of the trio, even if it takes a while for him to warm up to people he genuinely tries to do the right thing even if his views on what may be right or wrong are messed up.
Jack- The most reasonable but also the coldest, berating Aaron over the past even when he doesn't mean to. He is often indifferent about others and rarely shows himself. When he does show himself he has curly black hair, light skin, and worn down clothes. His clothes consist of a whiteish-greyish T-shirt and blue pants along with a deep blue sleeveless cloak with no hood. Has black eyes that make him difficult to read at times.
Corru- Manipulative and has bad anger issues. He often goes by 'The ends justify the means' and will push those he knows to live by it as well with no thought to how it will affect them. He is more likely to show himself, especially when someone specifically tries to anger him. He has unkempt ginger hair, slightly tanned skin, freckles, and orange animal like eyes. He sometimes switches control with Aaron. He wears a plain wool tunic that ends at the hip and simple black linen pants with tan chukka style boots.

I might have a character who is experimented on, my story is still in the beginning stages so idk yet. It would make sense for there to be characters that are experimented on in my world, so I'll probably have one or two.

So Aaron and Corru have like the same body or are they like Nykidia and Night or…?

I have a character called Chesh who was experimented on. She was experimented on a group of scientists who tried to create a super soldier. Two people of this scientist group, Ava and Zara, found it wrong and tried to burn the place to the ground. Chesh escaped and ran off to find Titakii.

Corru is like Night and Nykidia, sharing a link with Aaron through their soul. When he does show himself he is ghostly in appearance because, well, he's a ghost. Jack is someone Aaron knew in the past, and sticks around and while cold helps Aaron by reminding him to keep his magic in check. For the most part Jack keeps to himself, Corru intervening more with being more likely to show himself or influence what Aaron does.