forum Plot help?
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@The Seliph-loving Gryffindor who also loves dragons and cats

Okay, okay.
So, I'm writing a Warriors series of 3 "books". In the first "book", the plot is about humans (the cats call them Twolegs) that want to build something (town, amusement park, zoo, whatever). The place they want to build on is the forest the Clans live in, and LionClan must stop them. The problem is, I don't know how to properly execute a conservation plot, but it's the only plot I can think of. That is what I need help with. I don't want to force the message, but I don't know what else to do.

@WriteOutofTime

Ohhh okay, that makes sense. The best thing to do here would be to make sure the humans aren't evil, but just indifferent. The humans shouldn't even think twice about destroying the LionClan's home. Also, focus on the LionClan's reactions to the destroying of their home. Make them angry, helpless, confused, etc. A conservation plot's always going to be a little cliché, but if you add your own spin to it, it should work just fine. :D