forum Dunno how to finish my story...

Started April 07, 2018 by @p3ncil

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Long story short, main character started super rich, then her family was murdered, then she was living on the streets, then captured and essentially sold into slavery, escapes that with this one dude who turns out to be the kid of the guy who killed her family, and who wants to wage war on her country, but she starts to sabotage him and then after a while, it becomes apparent that he is not doing it for his own country but he is being paid by this other queen from a third country… so here we are, main character in the third country, facing this queen as their world is on the edge of a giant war….. and now I'm stuck. I know that whole thing may have been confusing and longwinded and vague so if yall need details I got you.

depends if you plan on a sequel, and if you want a cliffhanger or not. If you want to end the story right there, you have to find some way to defuse the big war, or at least get your character out of there alive. Or maybe not, it could be a tragedy but who knows. If you want a sequel, you could just end it right there on a cliffhanger. You could also have her form some kind of plan, or have some kind of bad thing happen to her and then have a Person Who Is Significant But We Don't Know That Yet come and help her. Or you could do something completely different. This seems like a big and complicated story, so who knows how its going to finish. These are some options though.

Okay, thanks for getting my brain to start moving again!