forum What would you title this?
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@Paperok

The Dark Lord rules over a medieval world from a floating palace with the legendary sword of the chosen one and his ¨handmade¨ assistant Zurla; they await the annual attack of heroes chosen by the king in attempts to defeat The Dark Lord every attempt fails and every hero dies, the world desperately searches for the prophesied Chosen One unaware of the reality that the Dark Lord himself is the Chosen One who killed the true Dark Lord and took up his spot. One day a special hero arrives at The Dark Lords palace, a hero blessed with invincibility; The Dark Lord annihilates him over and over again but the hero continues to return. (The story is from the perpective of the Dark Lord) (The Dark Lord`s name is Jotham Sheba)

@MarylynBirds

First of all: LOVE THIS PLOT
pls, tell me that the reader doesn't know Jotham is the 'bad guy' at first???

anyway, lemme think…
maybe something like: fight fire with fire (or an enhanced version of this…)
oorrrrr 'the chosen and the invincible'
(they make me think of Dr. Doofenshmirtz and Agent P, the fight just goes ooon and on)
sounds nice to: 'on and on' or '(going)round and round'
'after the battle' (with the dark lord) or something like that….

these are the first few ones that popped into my mind, maybe you can get some inspiration from them. Good luck!

@MarylynBirds

you're welcome
beware that it might sound a bit cliche or something like that idk to some people…
cause it could also be the story about two people who are teaming up. Maybe change the 'and' to 'or'?
It's your book so do whatever you like!

@Krista Williams

It depends on the tone you want for your story. If its humorous, I think @writelikeyourerunningoutoftime's suggestion would be hilarious. But if its not, you could go with "Immovable" or "Unstoppable" or something along those lines.

Some other things might have to do with the theme of your story. Do you have any particular motifs in your story that seem important? A phrase that's repeated? SOmething like that makes a good title.

Hope this helps!