forum The Sinner's Bloodline: Heritage of Dust and Sand
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This is a fresh thread because my old account was deleted.

Hello! Thanks for visiting!
I'm going to be making posts here of snippets and things from a storyline in my head from like 2022. I'm trying to dip my toes back into writing. Feel free to follow along with me. I'm just trying to hop back in to creative writing. I'm just trying to throw stuff at the wall and see what sticks, it's by no means in chronological order.

Potential gore warning, other assorted trigger warnings relating to mental health and abuse


Yurul is host to various different species, all wildly different from each other, yet over time the planet developed the clasification of 'light' and 'dark' species. Light being creatures who were deemed to have the moral high ground based on nature alone, while dark being prone to unecessary wrongdoing. There are some cultures who take this label very seriously, and often there tends to be many civil disagreements as to the category any particular species fell in to.

Most often, people can agree to label Esokan as a dark species without much discussion, similar to many others who reside in the large desert of Pillax. Esokan are species quite complex. They have rich history and an even richer culture.

Yurul, a planet with no shortage of magical beings and mystic arts, relies on an ancient hierarchy of lineages. Many families gain and fall out of power through planned marriages and business deals. Some families have done away with betrothals and worries about power, but the custom is a large part of all cultures in Yurul. The planet is divided into five regions: Pillax, Qéo, Varesia, Hykno, and Islilia.

Pillax is a desert wasteland, just sand for miles and miles. This region is inhabited by demons, cursed bloodlines, centaurs, dragons, Pillaxian ox, Esokan, and some specialized magic users. Most non-native creatures avoid the area, as it is easy to get lost in the endless dunes. Qéo is filled with dense rainforests and plants. Botanists flock to the region, and 36% of the planet's oxygen supply is produced from the forests there. Fae, fairies, elves, fauns, nymphs, sprites, ents, and other magical creatures inhabit the area. Varesia is the typical story book fantasy land with stone castles and quaint villages, but a handful of cities in the region are much more modernized with skyscrapers and huge electrical plants. Electrical sprites and other technical beings live in the large cities -along with some non-magic beings and magic users aspiring to start something for themselves- whereas most magic users, non-magic users, unicorns, healers, Elmards, witches and wizards, alchemists, house dwarves, and enchantresses live in the rest of the region. Hykno is filled with ice caverns and tunnels that burrow into the mountains. Along with some non-magic miners, golems, orcs, mountain dwarves, dragons, Cretians, some scientist's labs, and lesser ice beings reside in the region. Islilia is the oceans and scattered islands that cover the rest of the planet. Serpents, mermaids, sirens, kelpie, krakens, hippocampus, and pirates traverse these waters.

Kené Eoiali is the younger of two brothers from a substantial, feared family from the Pillax region.

The elves are highly impoverished and have an intense military regime. Most foreigners avoid the area, both out of disgust for the extreme poverty and out of safety. Not only are you subject to being caught in the crossfire of the rebellion warfare tactics, but there is extreme risk in dealing with their temperamental political leaders.

Esokan tribal system
Tribal roles
-Herders
-Water summoners
-Herbalist/medicinal
-Children/education
-Warriors/Fight masters
-Chieftan
-Ambassador
-Executioner

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"Come on! Kené keep up!" Sarsönil Eoiali called down to his brother as he waited at the top of the dune. He didn't exactly care that his younger brother couldn't match his pace, only that he wanted to go farther, and he didn't want to get in trouble for his brother getting lost. This was the furthest they had ever gotten from the tribe, and Sarsönil was alive with the adventure. His parents sent him and his brother to go check on the herd, and even though Sarsönil didn't realize it was a task that wasn't expected to be completed by the eleven and five year old Esokan, he felt like an outlaw as he neglected his instructions in favor of this. The two boys had been wandering for quite a while now, and here was his reward.

A stone castle rose out of the sand like a hand reaching into the heavens. It was submerged in the sand- an untold story of the castle's architecture left to be explored. The visible stone was dark, unnaturally dark, especially in comparison to the deep red sands of Pillax that went on for miles. It only made the winding pillars and ominously open hatch more appealing to the naive little boys. "Kené! Look look look!" Sarsönil grabbed his brother's arm just before he crested the dune. The younger lit up at the sight.

"Let's go let's go let's go!" The boy giggled, his tired wobble turning into a run down the dune toward the submerged castle. Sarsönil wasn't too far behind. He didn't consider what his parents might think, both of their unsanctioned expoloration and their distance from the tribe. Afterall, they didn't have anything to worry about- Sarsönil had brought his father's dagger. It was lucky, or at least that was what the boy was convinced of.

It was only a matter of moments before the climbed to the castle's surface and peered down into the open hatchway that led into nothingness. A ladder that was much too big for the younger to climb down was all that stood between them and untold treasures. "I have an idea," Sarsönil started, seconds before scooping up his younger brother to latch on to his back. It was awkward and clunky for the small Esokan, but his papa carried him like this many times when he was young. He shifted, nearly falling over with his brother's weight on his back, before scrambling to get on the ladder. He reached his foot down, once then twice before moving one hand too, while the other supported the younger Esokan on his back. Sarsönil made his was awkwardly down one, two, three, and four more rungs, the light from the desert sun slowly becoming isolated to the hatch that was now above his head. He was climing into the abyss.

Into Death waiting with open arms.

His bare feet carefully found the next ladder rung, toes scraping against it. Odd. The other rungs were stone, a built in part of the castle, but this one was made of splintery wood. Sarsönil frowned as he gently put more weight on it. He moved his other foot down. Rocked on his toes a bit to tested the weight. "Sarsönil… it's really dark in here," Kené complained, tugging on his brother's shoulder. The movement was small, but it was enough to tip off the balance. Sarsönil felt his shoulder tilt back, and suddenly his fingers began to slip. His eyes widened, self preservation kicking in, and he used his other hand to sturdy himself. Leaving his brother to hold on for himself- something which the boy was not doing. The small weight was ripped off Sarsönil's back with a cry, and not even a breath later, there was a thud. Following by extreme wailing. Panic jolted through Sarsönil.

"Kené!" Sarsönil hopped off the ladder, earning himself a few splinters in his feet from the wooden rung. The ground was a bit farther than anticipated, and the action came at a price. "Ow…" He mumbled, brow furrowed in pain. He could understand why his brother was crying so much. He turned to face his brother, who was curled up and crying not a few feet away. Sarsönil, again, felt that panic jolt through him. There was blood. "Kené, it- it's going to be alright- uhhh- umm," Sarsönil's eyes began to well up with water. He didn't know what to do. They were far from home, too far from home for him to go get Mom. Where was Mom? She was always here for these kind of things. "I- I- I don't know what to do," The boy whispered, a sentence that was drowned out by his brother's cries of pain.

"Looks like you are in a predicament, youngling," A voice, cold and smooth as water drawn from the earth, came out of the shadows. Sarsönil tensed up, eyes wider than the full moon. He couldn't figure out where the voice came from- it sounded as if it was everywhere, but at the same time, entirely inside his head. "The little one seems to be injured. Quite badly, I mean, look at all that blood?" A dark chuckle. A sound that made Sarsönil's skin crawl. "I can help you… for a price." Sarsönil was about to shake his head, about to insist that he would go get Mom and things would be all better, but with a loud clang, terrifying, all the light from the hatch above was extinguished as it closed on its own accord. terroroverwhelmed Sarsönil. Terror, as he lost sight of his brother and all he could see was the inky blackness of nothingness. Terror, as a chill set in the room and he heard the shuffle of one footstep. Then two. "Come now boy, you are safe here with me," The voice echoed in his mind and the chamber. Unnnatural, cold, silky- this was very, very wrong.

Sarsönil couldn't hold in his tears just as the sand couldn't hold any water. "Pl-pl-please d-don't hurt- hurt- hic- K-Ken-" The rest of his words were left to incoherent blubberings as his legs buckled and he fell to the cold stone floor. What was he to do? Where was mom? Why was he here? Who was talking to him? Why-

Sarsönil was pulled out of the panic and terror that was trapping him within his mind as a candle was lit at the far end of the room. Then another. And another. The whole room sparked to life, wax candles against the stone walls and scattered on the floor. It was a triangular shaped room, with the ladder behind him on one wall, and the other two walls adorned with doorways leading to more darkness. At the point of the room, opposite to the ladder, was something like an altar. It was made of stone, decorated with many carvings and a large bowl -big enough to bath a small child- at the base. Behind the altar was a man in black robes. His chest was exposed to reveal tattoos, in the same style as the carvings on the altar. It looks to be depictions of stories, images of man and beast fighting, dying, and yet, living again. The man's skin was something Sarsönil had never seen before. It was a darker color, similar to Sarsönil himself, but at the top of his torso, it faded to a white that was paler than the clouds. His neck was thin, almost hollow looking, and his face- Sarsönil's eyes widened and the fear was instantly renewed. The skin was falling off, hanging along his face like a tattered cloth, to reveal patches of bone. This… this was a necromancer. Something even Esokan feared from time to time. Something that his mother told him to stay away from. As far away as possible.

Necromancers were magic users, but somewhere along the way they crossed a line that should not be crossed. They were rotten down to their souls, only a sliver of who they once were. Very few of them existed on Yurul, and the few that did were outlaws to many civilizations. Hence, many made their home in the deserted land of Pillax, if not in some underground market Varesia. They were beings to be feared, never to be reasoned with. Never to be intereacted with, according to his mother. "Boy, tell me," The necromancer said softly but not sweetly, "what are two Esokan boys doing so far from their tribe?" Not a question that Sarsönil was going to answer, the necromancer found after a few moments. It didn't seem to bother him all that much. The man shifted his robes as he pulled Kené into view- blood was dripping down the side of the crying boy's face. "Aw hush now, child," The necromancer added, and at Kené's continued crying, his face turned rageful and he spat out in an unworldly voice, "Somortem."

Sarsönil felt like the life was sucked out of him as his brother's small body went limp. It was as if his mind went white, something deep inside his blood awakening, a feeling stretching from the back of his neck to his fingers and toes. He couldn't form words, he couldn't even react-

"Don't worry, your friend is still alive," The necromancer said nonchalantly as he set the younger Esokan down on the table. The hot white feeling from the back of his neck slowed. The man glanced up at Sarsönil before flicking his wrist to gesture behind the older boy. "Fetch me the blood and emerald bottles, obedium." Sarsönil didn't have control over his body as he turned to face a roughly cut log shelf -the wooden 'ladder rung' that he had stepped on- and picked up a thin vial filled with a deep red color and a jar full of a metallic green material. His legs brought him, one painful and stiff step at a time, around the altar to the man's rotting feet. A maggot had made its home in one of them. Sarsönil's body betrayed him as he presented both liquids to the man. The necromancer smiled as he looked down at the boy. "You… you are a peculiar one. Not many try to resist my magic." He swiped until the two containers, leaving Sarsönil to stand and watch. He could see his brother laying on the table, blood crusting over his face. His eyes darted to the ladder- too far and too hard to climb quick enough to escape without trouble. That wasn't even factoring in the time and strength required to open the hatch at the top. His eyes travelled to the necromancer. While Sarsönil was looking for an escape plan, he had been talking. "…and a splattering of oxyoto juice, and he could dissolve in front of your very eyes- but we wouldn't want that, now would we? So I will do you a favor. I will save his life, he will just be a bit different." The necromancer crouched down, an unsettling crunch coming with the movement, so he was eye level with Sarsönil. "However, as I'm sure you may know, necromancers need a willing sacrifice to be able to reimbue the body of another with the life of old. So, all I need from you is-"

With a swift movement, Sarsönil gave in to what his blood wanted. He reached behind him to draw his father's dagger, shimmering in the candlelight, from his back- underneath the folds of his tunic. His instincts took hold of his movements and he slashed the dagger into the necromancer's throat. It was as if he'd done it a million times before- as if the weight of his ancestors guided not just his arm, but his torso, his wrist, his fingertips. He moved with the strength a mere boy should not have. Sarsönil. Sarsönil. We see you. Sarsönil. We know you. Sarsönil. We are you. Sarsönil. We are your brothers and sisters and mothers and fathers. Sarsönil. We are your blood. Sarsönil. We are your fate. Sarsönil. We are- Sarsönil let out a scream so fierce that he never knew he was capable of.

The necromancer garbled, his remaining face filled with dying rage. Sarsönil was trying to choke out words as his blood, black as night, splattered over him. It got in his eyes, his mouth, his nose- it smelled like an ox that had been left to rot in the sun for days. The necromancer's body jerked and twisted, convulsing as blood spilt on the floor beneath the altar. Sarsönil wobbled backwards, unable to find his voice, as he watched the body twist and crunch in supernatural ways. The skin seemed to melt off as the bones bent in on themselves, the black blood oozed and clotted instantly, and the organs seemed to pop and squish and seep out of the figure.

In his horror, Sarsönil was frozen. As the necromancer's body went limp, all bits of sound seemed to disappear and the weight of the emptiness in the room pressed in on him. Sarsönil. We are here. Sarsönil. We are you. Sarsönil. You are us. Sarsönil. You are our blood. Sarsönil. Listen. Sarsönil. Feel. Sarsönil. Let us guide you. Sarsönil. Sarsönil. The boy let out a horrid scream, not of fear but of anguish, as he fell to his knees. The weight of a thousand years pressed on his shoulders. His mind went in and out of focus. He felt different. He felt powerful.

Sarsönil's eyes moved towards his brother, who was still limp on the altar. He needed to kill him. He needed to kill him. It was the only thing that mattered right now. Sarsönil stepped forward, his mind and body lost to his ancestors. Sarsönil. Yes. Sarsönil- "Sars…" Kené mumbled, a pained groan coming out of him. "I'm scared." The older boy stopped, suddenly regaining feeling in his hands that he didn't know he lost. He gasped, air filling his lungs like water filling his stomach. Life- it felt like living again. Kené. And then he was moving.

Sars scrambled up the side of the altar, using strength he didn't realize he ever had. Certainly not the strength an eleven-year-old should have. It felt as if he'd done this thousands of times. The boy grabbed his younger brother and slung him over his back, then dropped to the ground. He made his way to the ladder, using the shelves in the cabinet to pull himself up the rungs. With one hand holding his brother to his back and the other desperately clinging to each rung, his breath was steady but labored, his hands shakey but strong. Each step upwards was accompanied by the threat he wouldn't be able to catch the rung in time. Sars made it to the top of the ladder, the hatch being his only obstacle left. "It's gonna be okay Kené," Sars huffed, grunting as he pressed his head to the cold metal. He forced it open with the help of his shoulder, barely enough strength left to crawl up into the sand, let alone walk back to the tribe. He wobbled forward into the sand, bare feet sinking down, and then he lost his grip. His brother slipped off his back into the sand, and Sars quickly followed as his vision went dark and he passed out.

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As he walked back to the tents, Sars' tired feet sank against the sand like the weary traveler that he inherently was. The oxen had been settled for the night, all re-herded within the tribe's view to rest under the glimmering stars. They were such peaceful yet powerful creatures. Each one of their eight legs rippled with muscle that could kill a fully grown golem with one swift kick. Sars had never seen them attack someone, even in defense, in his entire life. Maybe that was what had drawn the esokans into sheperding the Pillaxian ox- the creatures could keep such innate power locked under their skin without struggle.

Boo hoo. You poor child, with the untampered strength of thousands that came before him. You ungrateful little boy. Sars tried his best to shut the voices out.

Sars had finished tending to the oxen when the nightly fire ritual had started, but he delayed his return so that he could traverse the camp with fewer interactions. The tribe was quieting down for the night, the young esokans being put to bed and most families fastening their tents shut with leather rope that would weave between the oxen hide. All were at peace except Hannau, the tribe's water summoner, who was having a tense discussion with no one other than his mother outside the her tent. "Saraih," Hannau hissed her insult- Chieftans were only to be addressed as such, to use his mother's personal name was a disgrace in itself. The angry woman's eyes flared with contempt, "I feel the ancestor's calling to me. My time is running out, and yet you sit here and cause the tribe to rely on me for their life force. I am weakening. One day, you will not have me, and you will feel the ancestor's wrath on my behelf. If you let my tribe down- need I remind you, you have a son with the sacred power and you do nothing to-"

"That is enough." His mother's voice was always powerful, but it held a flavor of eeriness when paired with the quiet of the camp. "My tribe is taken care of and my first born is not yours to declare." Hannau opened her mouth to no doubt continue the argument, but then her eyes caught the approaching male. The first born in question bowed his head in respect to the Chieftan.

"Hannau," Sars said in greeting with a nod towards the only other water summoner in the camp. A look of guilt coated the female before he turned to his mother, "Chieftain, the ox have been tended to. Are there any other duties I need to attend to?"

Before addressing him, his mother waved a hand at Hannau to signal her dismissal. Thankfully, she obeyed, and within the moment, all that was left of her was a path in the sand. Saraih turned towards him now. "We have an arrangement to discuss, Sars." She turned into her tent, not waiting to see his nod of submission as she slipped into the darkness of the tent decorated with sacred paintings and traditional bone art. Once Sars stepped in behind her, small tongues of fire appeared, dancing in the air before coming to rest at the corners of the tent. It was just light enough for Sars to see the details of his mother's aging face. Wrinkles had made their home beside her deep violet eyes, evidence of the joy she experienced throughout her life. It was rather rare for an esokan to be marked with such wrinkles, hence being a sign of aged beauty.

She, too, will join us one day sooner than you think. The message sent a shiver down his spine, prodding his next words into existence, "Is everything okay, mother?" She shot him a look, one that chastized his concern, but she didn't verbalize it as she sat down on the sand with legs folded beneath her. Sars copied her.

"I need you gone." The words pierced his heart more than he would ever admit to the woman before him, "Tomorrow morning." Sars couldn't contain the shock that was revealed on his face. He had just returned to his tribe two nights ago, and she wanted him to leave again? Yes, esokans were nomadic, but there was a great value placed on the home being the tribe. In the past few moon cycles, it felt as if he no longer had a home to return to. Your tribe is us. We are your tribe. You do not need these disabled people. It is time to cut down what is in front of you and take your birthright.

Sars had to dig his nails into his palms to distract him from the voices. He looked into his mother's eyes, hoping to convey his pleading as he spoke, "Tomorrow morning? So soon? I-" He bit his tongue to try to keep himself from disrespecting her. It didn't work. "Mother, I have travelled for so long for this tribe. I'm barely a man, and yet I've left the deserts three times now. Three. Some of these people have never even left our camp once in their whole lifetime." Sars could feel his anger bubbling to the surface- each word fueling his self proclaimed right to be fed up with the situation. "Hannau is right. I'm needed here. You need me to do more than just delivering messages and- and playing spy-for-hire for some noble who can't satisfy his woman." He knew his mother wouldn't care for his tone nor his immature phrasing, but he didn't particularly care. His building rage was met by his mother's calm stare. See how little she cares? She isn't even giving your words any merit, Sarsönil. Was she really not giving his words any merit? Did she really not care?

Sars felt fire churning in his gut, and he opened his mouth to continue his rant, but his mother cut in with a snap, "I am your Chieftan, and you will address me as such." Cold. Very cold. "You will be leaving before the sun dances along the horizon tomorrow. There is a job in Varesia that you need to complete- I have prepared a travel bag that contains your instructions. You-"

One moment, Sars was fuming as he sat across from the woman who birthed him. The next, he leap across to her, pinning her to the ground with a blade to her throat. For the first time in his life, Sars saw his mother flinch. Sars growled with a voice that sounded both ancient and youthful, "I am not a bomb to send away to explode." Sarsönil. Slit her throat. It took everything in him to ignore how his muscles screamed to press the blade into his Saraih's throat. He withdrew the blade, to which she swiftly threw him off of her and pulled out a knife of her own. Her face was schooled into neutrality, but he could tell she had the same fire bellowing in her gut as he had in his mind. Sarsönil. He bit his tongue, eyes not leaving his mother's. Sarsönil. It could've been hours, and he wouldn't have known. Sarsönil.

Sars dug his nails into his palm and got to his feet, making a swift exit from the Chieftan's tent. Mercifally, his mother didn't follow.