forum Need someone to read my first chapter.

Started April 08, 2018 by @Ghosyt

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I've read and rewrote my chapter 1 so many times that it sounds like complete crap to me and i could do with an extra set of eyes just to read through it and give me some pointers, thanks.

I'm really new to this website but I'd like to give it a shot and read your chapter one.

I can read the chapter also, do you have a link or something to it?