forum I need helppppp (mostly with like names and personalities, ages, etc...)
Started by @Fraust
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@Fraust

So, I have this writing idea that I haven't started yet. I copy and pasted my description from another chat btw, so it might sound slightly weird in the beginning on its own, but you get the idea.

Thanks guys! I think my main problem would be figuring out how to reveal the fact that the original protagonist is actually, well, not good in a way. Would it be sudden? Probably not, as any protagonist can make mistakes. I was thinking of a sort of slow reveal, where the 'protagonist' slowly reveals their twisted morals and more about the 'antagonist's goals are revealed. Perhaps the original antagonist is actually trying to fight the original protagonist because they're trying to break into/destroy their kingdom. The 'antagonist' would likely be some sort of king, queen, or person of authority who would send people after the 'protagonist repeatedly tries to hurt people or break in. The way that the original protagonist narrates the story makes it seem as though they are good and always in the right, and that the 'antagonist' ruler is actual a dictator or unjust ruler that must be taken down. Then, the morals and goals are slowly revealed for both, and the original antagonist is trying their best to protect their people and the original protagonist actually wants to take down the ruler so that they could steal their position, using any means necessary to do so. Then, it would switch perspectives to the new protagonist, aka, the original antagonist.

@Fraust

I was thinking like, a guy character for the original protagonist/actual antagonist and a queen for the original antagonist/actual protagonist