forum How should I go about this?
Started by @Lavy-the-Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy
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@Lavy-the-Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy

I'm writing a short story that takes place on a spaceship and I decided that the first bit (Kind of prologue kind of not) is from the ship's computer's POV. Any suggestions on lingo and formatting for that?

@Lavy-the-Nerdy-Sci-Fi-Birdy

I should've elaborated a bit more.
The beginning part is S.O.N.A. (the computer) and the (For lack of better words) internal commentary as it reads on the scanners that they're nearing a space station and it starts the crew's wake up process (They're all in cryostasis)

@CWTurtleOfFreedom

I would maybe not give the computer a conscience or make it seem “alive” at all. I might just lay out the scans as the computer is receiving them, maybe a line of code when it begins waking up the crew, with a line under it that reads something like, “Beginning cryo-wake process.” (I know that’s not what it’s called lol but I can’t think of the word rn.)

I don’t know if this is what you were going for, but I hope it helped!