forum Needs some constructive criticism on plot idea
Started by @Randompreson
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@Randompreson

The plot starts off with Grisella Durante (the protagonist) finding out about her sister's (Ernesta) suicide . After the funeral, she takes it upon herself to investigate her sister's collage life–with the help of her two best friends—in order to try to find out why her sister may have ended it all. However, their investigation leads them to a major drug circle, where clients could get the illegal drugs they wanted for free, as long as they kept doing the challenges administered to them via a online texting app. What makes it worse is that the more Grisella and her friends look into it, the more it seems that Ereneta didn't commit suicide, but rather was murdered. Suddenly, their investigation goes from investigating Ernesta solely to figuring out the bigger picture on her involvement with illegal drug circles.

Anonymous author

It seems like a very good plot. One thing I noticed was when it said they would just solely be investigating the drug circles. It sounds like they're not going to try to find who murdered her sister. Are they completely dropping trying to figure out what happened to her? Are you never going to reveal the killer? That might anger your viewers, make them feel unsatisfied, annoyed, etc.