forum Can someone look at what I have so far?

Started August 11, 2019 by @nat

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I know its a lot to ask but can anyone comb through everything ive got int here? I've been doing a lot of editing and want to make sure this makes sense. Iwanna make sure the characters make sense in the world.

It sounds like a really unique and interesting idea. I think you did a good job, I'd also love to read it when it's finished :P