forum Share Your First (And Worst) OC

Started October 08, 2018 by @GoodThingGoing group

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Not a bad evolution.

The first character that I came up with (Aged like seven or eight lol) was basically myself but secretly a spy. I was writing a story with characters that were all based on my friends. I don't think I even changed the names lol. I had some more characters based on my friends about age nine or ten but they were all actual characters. They could each turn into a different animal, it was based off of a dream I had I think lol. I had a bunch more characters I roleplayed as at primary school but my first real oc was a dragon called Silver Comet.

I was writing a story with characters that were all based on my friends. I don't think I even changed the names lol. I had some more characters based on my friends about age nine or ten but they were all actual characters. They could each turn into a different animal

Oh my god this actually sounds pretty similar to my first story. The main character was a self insert and her two friends were based on two of my closest friends at the time. I scrapped the two friend characters and replaced them because I found them to be too boring (The shade!)
All the characters were from a parallel universe where everyone could turn into a different animal that was meant to reflect their personality. But since I was super obsessed with horses, all the characters could turn into a different horse breed that reflected their personalities. The only one who couldn't turn into a horse was the main villain, and he was a wolf.

My first OC was Pinkie Pie. Yes, the My Little Pony character. I watched that show (the older version) when I was little and started making up stories about how she's actually a superhero that fights monsters and villains with my stuffed animals and Link and Batman and all sorts of characters from a bunch of different universes, however, it wasn't really pinkie pie, just an OC of the same name and design because back then I was too dumb to actually come up with characters of my own. I actually tried to write a book off of her using Word and MS Paint (I was 7 btw) and… You can probably guess how that turned out. I think I still have the documents so I might be able to show you all a chapter or some of my *cough * …"ARTWORK".

Update: I found the stories:

one day a unicorn queen named rarity was haveing a baby. her husband, starcacher, was flying up to the clouds with rarity on his back. when they were on the clouds. rarity got off starcacher and soon she had her baby. as soon as the baby was born, she flew off the clouds on starcacher. the baby's name was pinkie pie. she had to explore the clouds and jump off the cloud before her 6 hour timer runs out. so, she went to explore. on the way she met link. soon, they became the best of friends. then, a 5 year old was being mean to link, and then pinkie came. she saw link was in trouble and she was so strong she scared off the 5 year old. and soon the big minute came. then link jumped on her back to go down to explore ponyville. soon pinkie realized she had wings and a horn! so, she jumped off, spread out her wings and flew down with her friend. she was a very good flyer! they had a party. a pony's cutie mark is created by the first thing they do when they jump off the clouds, so pinkie got ballons. when she was 1, she saw a hero named thor, he saved her life. (only because she was cute and small, orelse she woldve saved herself.) when she was 2, though, she got struck by lightning. she was ok, in fact, she got special powers: she was as fast as lightning, she could shoot fireballs, she was heat resistant, she could become invisible, when she gets mad she becomes an AWESOME fire monster. but the bad thing is, she can not be cold, wet or shot with an arrow or as you probably have already figured out: she will die. after she got those abilities, she met three magical talking animals: flower, bess, and honey. they had powers too, to heal themselves, but that was useless because they were invincible. so pinkie taught them how to heal others, and by "heal" she found out that they really meant bring themselves back to life when they were DEAD! so they helped pinkie survive the winters, and there was almost no problems in ponyville ever again.

                                                       the end.

one day, pinkie pie was strolling along the galaxies in her space rider (invisible rocketship powered by light) looking for an undiscovered planet. when she saw the milky way, no other pony had before! she named it the starry hole. knew she would find a planet there! & she saw jupiter, (she named it "redy planet") saturn, (she named it "precious") neptune, (she named it "dolphin planet") & all the other planets, but she loved earth the most. (she had no idea what to name it though, so she called it "nothingness2" nothingness1 is pinkies planet) she wanted to name this weird galaxy, so she called it "the starry hole galaxy" she wanted to visit each one in case she would find something. & when she visited nothingness2, she had a big suprise! huge buildings, lots of wierd slow thingys (cars at lightning's point of view) and even slower LIVING thingys, (humans) but soon she saw iron man, captain america & all the other avengers. she slowly landed her rocket behind a trash can, but the avengers spotted her almost INSTANTLY! (its hard not to spot you when you light the building behind you on fire)

                                                                                             the end.                 

chapter 1~ sappire star~ one day pinkie was doing her daliy duty of protecting ponyville when she rembered she was supposed to go to the clouds to have a baby. When she got there she had one cute Little blue unicorn baby with a brown mane and tail. "she is so cute!" said pinkie. She named her sappire star.

chapter 2~ danger~ when she got home she wanted to tell the others about how protecting ponyville went but she wanted to help her baby learn how to use her tiny little horn to do magic first. but as soon as she finished someone broke in, and set the house on fire. that would not be a bad thing becuse fire heals pinkie. but her kids are not the same. "girls, come here! we all have to get out!" said pinkie. to escape, pinkie had to break a window, grab all three of her kids, and jump out of the house. that is a lot of danger.

chapter 3~ not safe~
pinkie had to get some ponys to take care of her kids wile she was gone getting food from the berry bush and helping her pets at the farm getting milk and eggs from the cows and chickens. it was fun, but she had to make sure that she did not get hurt. she knew that her kids were fine. but that same guy came in, and pinkie lost all her powers! and he was going to kill her! "help!" shouted pinkie. no one heard her. that, is not safe.

chapter 4~ the story of kids~
but then a thing that was good and bad happened to pinkie, it was her kids! they were comeing to save her! that is the good thing, the bad thing is they are not very good at it yet. and pinkie was stuck, with no powers, and running as far as possible. she must have been very lucky becuse the first thing sappire learned was how to give pinkie her powers back! and sappire did it! that, is the story of kids.

                                                                    the end.

Note: I made an album of the cringey artwork I made too
https://ibb.co/album/gp3xTv

Another note: GRAMMARLY IS GOING NUTS HERE- It's detected 63 spelling errors and 101 premium errors, that's how bad this is

^ Ahh, smol me not understanding how children work

Ah yes…. Beccany Hashbrom. A "I have older brothers and that's why I can fight" Mary Sue of a scoundrel. As you might be able to tell from the name, I created her when I was 9.

@"NutEllaDraws (There Will Be NO CURSING On My GOOD CHRISTIAN SERVER)" Yeah, that's a pretty accurate representation of how smol ones write. Also, I don't think any children firmly grasp how children work.

I forgot her name but she was Timmy Turner's sister who was the straight man and stuff. She also could see the fairies for some reason.

My first original character was named Jaya Coray (Now Jacob Coray), he was a fourteen year old demi-god type thing with mind powers. I made him when I was twelve.
Here's a link to drawings of him and the comic I started about him. The cringe is pretty self explanatory.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1f9iH3xOay6N44TvZVZn2naHZYY5vO1um?usp=sharing
Here's his profile on here

My first real oc was possibly my most Mary Sue character used to be Taylor…she was a princess of a lost kingdom that after some VERY tragic events become one of the most powerful creatures to exists….half human half demon too! I don’t wanna write everything but she was the most Mary Sue I’ve ever written, I still have Taylor as my cast but I’ve overhauled her character to be better, still needs some work done but I hate getting rid of characters so I’m gonna make it work.

hahaha prepare for this one, all your nightmares in one. this is not even satire, honest to god this was a character i had.

name - hoshi (google translated 'star' in japanese, not my finest moment)
age- 15-16
physical description (prepare yourselves) - certified "smol bean". wears oversized clothing because she is just too "smol" to get clothes that fit her (it was just like some anime school uniform mixed with some magical girl elements). since she is the main character, i have pulled up a sketch from a lined notebook with some physical descriptions on the side "adorable smile, "too-big" sleeves, main character( yes, that was on the sheet). very descriptive (not). long brown hair and the palest skin on earth. she also had lime green eyes. later in the "story" she gets some super sick mary sue lavender-pastel purple hair and its slightly shorter and has angel wings. in some early "development" she, no joke, had cat ears and a tail. i quickly forgot about that

hobbies - she had none because she was apparently naturally talented at things never brought up before

skills- pro at swordfighting on her first try. also apparently super good at like magic and stuff.

other stuff - this one super boring mc character guy boy person fell head over heels for her but showed no other emotion and had absolutely no written reason for liking her.

"help!" shouted pinkie. no one heard her. that, is not safe.

that, is not safe