forum Share some of the antagonists from your worlds!
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@Mojack group

hello, I’m reviving this because this is a pretty good thread that we can still get use of. using this to talk about my character, Sira.

Who are they?: Siirawyn Joselvin. A former farmer, to Ter Kvis soldier, to “im trying to recover from my trauma,” to powerful magic (Aeth) user, to cult leader, to magical tree, to Aeth beast. yeah, he goes through some things.

What are they about?: At some point, even he admits he’s lost sight of his original goal, but does not believe himself to be capable of redemption. “Gone too far, might as well continue,” sort of deal. Siirawyn is all about getting revenge, first on the Serloven (a kingdom in his world) then his own kingdom, the Ter Kvis, after they execute his parents. Then, his mind shifts towards creating a new world, where all Aeth users can be safe. Initially, he is incredibly determined to reach this goal, but as time goes on, and his health declines due to his curse, he becomes more wary. He never admits this to his cult members, much less his enemies.

What are their goals, if any?:

  • Revenge (Serloven people, for killing his brothers: succeeded. Ter Kvis, for killing his parents: succeeded). He demonstrated his powers by burning 1/4th of the Ter Kvis capital.
  • Becoming a powerful Aeth User (succeeded). From when he was born, Siirawyn had plenty of Aeth. He may very well be the human with the largest amount of Aeth, to date - even a thousand years after his ‘death.’ When he made a deal in the Forbidden Labyrinth, he gained the means to control his Aeth, and became perhaps the strongest Aeth user ever, reaching his prime at 33 years old, just 7 years shy of his death.
  • Making a new world where those with Aeth in their veins are safe (succeeded in a way, failed in other ways). While after his ‘death,’ the world had the highest recorded percentage of Aeth users, who were stronger than before and could defend themselves with ease, some of them became corrupted with strange Aeth, turning into what can be known as “Aeth Beasts,” who ravage the world.

Are they really ‘evil?’: Sort of. Not from the beginning - younger Siirawyn was far more reserved, more stable - and would have been more than content to remain on his family farm, if it weren’t for his brothers convincing him to come along to join the army. If you’re non Aeth user, you’ll most likely see him as evil. If you’re Aeth, you might still see him as evil, depending on where you’re from (if from a place where Aeth users are treated well or neutrally, you’d see him as bad probably). He reaches a climax for how evil he is at a certain point, then gradually declines. By the time of his resurrection a thousand years later, he’s still got a bit of hatred left in him, but not as focused as he once was.

Backstory?:

  • Had three siblings, one died as an infant, grew up with two brothers instead.
  • Grew up on a farm, did plenty of farm work and learned important skills.
  • For someone living outside of a castle, had a decent life.
  • At 21, the Ter Kvis army went out to prepare for a “big war,” his brothers convinced him to join, saying they would return soon.
  • Trained, fought in small battles. Learned new skills and improved others.
  • A big point was the storming of a big Serloven fortress. While initially successful, Sira learned after the battle that both of his brothers had been killed.
  • Gradually became less optimistic as time went on. Stayed in the army to continue the war, but began to doubt.
  • Eventually tried to go back home at 23 by running away. He was spotted, and fired upon with arrows.
  • Severely injured, Sira fled, escaping his pursuers by entering the Forbidden Labyrinth.
  • Exact details are unknown, but it was here he made a deal with something in the Labyrinth - said to be a powerful spirit, who gave him the means to control his Aeth, but left him with a curse that would punish him in the coming decades.
  • He spent some time recovering, aided by his Aeth. Then went home.
  • He lived a somewhat peaceful life for a while.
  • One day, he left to get something for his parents, came back, only to learn they were gone. When he found them, they had been executed due to their association with him. People had spotted him doing Aeth magic, rumours of his escape from the Forbidden Labyrinth and death had risen, and people began to fear that it was not Siirawyn who escaped the Labyrinth, but a demon that had replaced him.
  • Angered, Siirawyn attacked the area, but found himself outnumbered and now branded an enemy of his own kingdom. Feeling betrayed, he fled.
  • He would eventually establish a cult, starting from vulnerable minded Aeth users. Eventually, the word would spread, and new people joined, Aeth and non Aeth users alike.
  • Began to hunt for his brothers killers. Somehow, he found them two years later, and was far from merciful.
  • One year later, he burnt down part of his kingdom’s capital. While it garnered him negative attention, it allowed a massive resurgence of members into his cult. Cult began to view him as some sort of god.
  • Turned his sights towards establishing a new world, promising to lead his followers into paradise.
  • Reached his prime at 33. From this age, his health began to decline, both mentally and physically. Suffered headaches, loss of appetite, fatigue, etc.
  • continued to lead his cult.
  • At around 40, he told his most trusted members to pass on the message - to “drink from the water that the roots connect to.”
  • He would then turn into a tree due to the curse. Cult members would drink the water, and become powerful Aeth users - even ones not originally born with it. News eventually spread, even non cult members wished to drink from the water.
  • His cult would protect this tree - fortifying it, building almost an entire castle overtop it; as well as a labyrinth. Not as elaborate as the original one, but hard to navigate, and booby trapped.
  • However, most of his cult members became warped by Aeth for whatever reason - turning into fearsome, but animalistic Aeth Beasts. Hard to kill, their only goal would be to protect the tree.
  • 1254 years later, the tree shifted, and Siirawyn awoke in a new form as an Aeth Beast. He was mildly disgusted by the current state of the world, but fought whoever woke him up anyways- and that’s all I have.

How did they come to be, or maybe they were rotten from the start?: Was not always bad. Maybe, if he stayed on the farm, he would have been fine. Or, for a more negative approach - if he suffered the same fate as his brothers, the world would have remained the same. Siirawyn did not live in a very good world. It did not do him many favours. His experiences made him the way he was.

Do they get redeemed somehow?: His ‘redemption’ is most likely death. He may have a moment of clarity prior to this, regret even - but he won’t fight on the side of the protagonists, at least not directly.

What do the other characters think about them?: His story takes place over 1000 years prior to the heroes’ story. They likely know very little of him aside from written records. When they learn of him, it’s like “Well, he can’t be alive, can he?” and others absolutely hate him for turning the world into what it is.
When they do learn of his current status, it’s fear, because what if you have to face one of the strongest beings to ever walk the planet?

What happens to them over the story?: human farmer with extremely mild aeth abilities > soldier with extremely mild aeth abilities > farmer with powerful aeth abilities > cult leader with powerful aeth abilities > special tree > Aeth Beast > dead

@Rabbi_Arsonist group

⚠SPOLIERS TO THE BOOK/SENSITIVE TOPICS⚠

Who are they: Loki, the most powerful Reisu

What are they about: Staying alive & punishing the world for their sins

What are their goals, if any: Stay alive

Are they really ‘evil: he doesn't think he is

Backstory: A normal little boy who lived with his family at age 9 who was happy as could be, only all of that was ruined until he became sick. A new disease that nobody had known of. Over the days, he became more pale, and his eyes were different. A series of symptoms went by in a week and as soon as it started. It ended. He had went on a rampage, with a want for blood and violence. When he realized what he was doing, it was already to late. There they were, the people who took care of him, on the ground, dead. He cried for days, he tried to kill himself, but to no avail, he couldn't. He didn't need food or water or sleep. He was gonna live, and there was nothing to do about it. One day, after he finally allowed himself peace, his parents voices were heard
'Please, live for us'
He knew that was meant to be sent earlier, but he still accepted it. As the world grew, the want to survve didn't fade, it only grew. He soon realized what humans were doing to the world, and only then he had met what caused all the pain in his life. The Reisu. The tiny being explained to him everything he needed to know. And with that, he set the world in flames of terror. Punishing them for their doings. That is the Story… of Loki Palpatine

How did they come to be, or maybe they were rotten from the start: The Backstory says it all :D
Do they get redeemed somehow: No idea! :D
What do the other characters think about them:
People who know his story (folktales); Very sad story… Though they must pay for their sins
Milaka: Don't hate him… just really dislike him… They are the reason for the pain of many others
Levi: Hate Him, didn't do anything to me. But he deserves death for his crimes.
Lisha: Loki? Who's that? The reason for the worlds downfall? meh I don't remember. or care.
Abree: Meh, didn't experience him, don't know, don't care. But it is my job to hunt him down.
People who did experience the pain because of him: Kill him. Burn him. He deserves death.
what happens to them over the story: Pfft… That's just spoilers :D can't answer that one :/

@trainwreck404 group

oh god, tw for murder and s/xual abuse
Who are they? Madeline Prince (she/her), almost normal human person, & Xavier Agreste (any pronouns), evil prince of Hell & all-around horrible dude. They run a supervillain team together called the Legion.
What are they about?/What are their goals? Being fucking assholes! That and taking over the world, but being just generally awful is their main goal. Xavier especially just really lives for fucking people over and ruining their lives; Madeline only really does it if it benefits her specifically.
Are they really "evil"? Oh 100%. Even just within the canon, Madeline has literally brainwashed and sexually abused two different dudes and Xavier was the abuser in a physically & sexually abusive relationship for 2 years. They are really shitty people. :)
Backstory? Oh god.
Madeline first! She had an odd childhood. Her father was a doctor and her mother a lawyer, so she grew up relatively wealthy. Because of this, she was also pretty spoiled growing up, although her parents barely paid her any attention. She started acting out in high school, getting in trouble with drugs, underage drinking, and sleeping around just to try and get her parents to pay attention to her. This, of course, did not work. She was 17 when she discovered her powers, "accidentally" manipulating a jock into sleeping with her. She absolutely fell in love (pun intended) with her powers and used them often. She went to college, met two of my other not-so-villainous characters, introducing one of them (Ava) to her demon friend Xavier! (That's a surprise tool that'll help us later.) After that first year of college, she dropped out to focus on petty villainy and eventually met Logan, her first brainwashing victim! They dated for a few months before she started hardcore brainwashing him into being her personal supervillain puppet, and soon after that, she and Xavier decided to build the Legion together, along with Logan and a couple of other not-so-villainous villains.
Within the content of the canon, Logan broke free of her control and she replaced him with Peter, who she also proceeded to sexually abuse and brainwash and ALSO force to kill his closest friends because of revenge stuff but that's not important to her. Later down the line, she continues to fuck with Peter, later forcing him to marry her before he inevitably also breaks free from her control and kills her. Good times.
And now we go to evil demon bastard Xavier. He was born in the late 12th century before dying in battle and going to hell after attempting to kill one of his own leaders. He slowly moved up through the ranks and in the 21st century, he decided to give Earth another shot, his last time on Earth being during the 18th century. He opened a strip club called Satan's Palace, which is how he met Madeline, who was lying about her age to strip & steal from old white men. The two of them really hit it off in their common affinity for being shitty people, and so she introduced him to her very quiet new college friend Ava! Ava is an angel, so Xavier absolutely wanted to corrupt her, which he did! By sexually and physically abusing her for two years! He also got her pregnant, and she escaped from him soon after the baby was born. He searched for her & child for a while before being able to lure her back to the Legion because of plot reasons that aren't important to him. He continued to torment her during their time in the Legion together, but her new boyfriend James acted as a decent buffer. He also aided in the murder of a superhero because of course he did. Eventually, he took that extra step and kidnapped Ava's daughter, which pissed Ava the fuck off and she killed him.
How did they come to be, or maybe they were rotten from the start? Madeline had shitty parents and Xavier was in hell for several hundred years, so they probably could have been good people?? I dunno.
Do they get redeemed somehow? Nah bro I let their victims kill them for therapeutic reasons.
What do the other characters think about them? Oh god everyone hates them. The only people who don't hate them are each other and Logan/Peter when they were being brainwashed.

@Nor_bananas

(This is super long but I put a lot of work into it)

Queen Rhine:

As a child she was abused by her father but thought this was normal so she didn't think anything of it. After he died she ran away and met Eliza. Eliza was a few years older than her and also a runaway. From then on they were outcasts together and became witches. Eventually Rhine develops feelings for Eliza. So she writes her a letter and on the day she plans on giving her the letter Eliza introduces her to her new Boyfriend Carter. Not long after a heartbroken Rhine gets in a fight with Eliza and they part ways. Rhine continues to work on her magic making it stronger.

She then speaks infront of the whole kingdom and claims she can speak to the goddesses Azu and Diem (basically this worlds god and satan). She uses her magic to make people believe her and she tells everyone that magic is born of Diem (satan) and that it is to be feared. She also says that it is Azu's wish for the people to burn all those who use magic. The people then make Rhine queen. A year later most of the witches and magic users who weren't killed are hiding away.

Rhine receives a visit from Eliza and her husband Carter. Eliza scolds Rhine for lying to everyone and begs her to renounce what she said about magic users. Rhine declines and offers them to stay the night. Eliza and Carter agree and late at night after they are asleep Rhine breaks into their rooms and kills them both with her magic. She then finds that Eliza and Carter brought their infant child with them. Rhine takes the girl in and calls her Hailey. She raises Hailey as her own using the same abusive behavior as her father but claiming that this is what love is.

She doesn't let Hailey leave the castle saying it is far to dangerous. Then she finds out that Hailey has been talking to a theif and 2 children of the staff. The night they all try to escape Rhine shows up to fight them but they fight back having possess magic of their own. After a long and brutal battle she is killed by Hailey herself. In her last moments Rhine gives Hailey a vial of her memories explaining everything about her and her parents. Her last words were "I can finally see my dearest Eliza again," Even in the end she never stopped loving Eliza.

@AnxietyGremlin group

My Antagonist is not only one of two MCs, He's dating the other MC.
Who are they?
-Kaixes
-Court Jester
-King of Crazy
(all one person)
What are they about?
-He lives for chaos. The thrill of the chase, the adrenaline of the kill, and power. raw, unfiltered, power
What are their goals, if any?
-To have fun. To do what he wants, when he wants
Are they really ‘evil?
-He isn't at first. But as the story progresses, he becomes the antagonist
Backstory?
-He was the royal court jester, treated like dirt by nobility and commoners alike, only to rise up, slaughter the king and anyone else he can, and gain the throne, gaining him the title "The King of Crazy"
How did they come to be, or maybe they were rotten from the start?
-He broke. Under all the pressure, all the expectations, and all the loss, His story is one about someone who couldn't persevere, but cracked and broke and embraced the reprecussions
Do they get redeemed somehow?
-No. He does not
What do the other characters think about them, what happens to them over the story?
Everyone loves him. his family, his inlaws, my other MC Mylaea. but he kills them. All of them.