forum Judge my OC's
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First of all, let me just apologize for making so many discussions lol. I find your input incredibly effective and inspirational in my writing development and I thank you all for that!
Anyways, I have a lot of characters, but for now I'm just going to put up my main character and two side characters. Tell me what they lack and or need to keep, or things that you think I should change!
Shirai Ralan Juzo - Shirai
Kesshoku Aben Aymer - Kesshoku
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/969309# - Elia/Eli