forum If Your Characters Were Betrayed by Someone Close to Them, How Would They React?
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Sorry if this sucks, this is my first post and I only found out about this site yesterday. These are my characters:
Syn: "Finally! I don't have to pretend to trust you anymore!"
Faybl: "Well that was unnecessary, why would you lie?"
Nyx: "Yeah, I'm used to it now."
Piper: "You little b*tch."
Myst: "Damn, you had me fooled, respect."
Indra: "Yeah, you're going down."

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Negative: (Stares at with a death glare, and her cyan eyes glow for half a second.) Bold of you to assume that I wont kill you in the next ten seconds. Your time starts now.

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Oh! This is actually going to happen in my podcast, the Narrator gets betrayed by their family/boss.
Their reaction is basically going to be: Speak not to me again, I will not think of you and if I do, it is for thoughts of death. (They then go join a bunch of criminals)

@Leshierian

Chester: "Yeah, I kinda cared about you but whatever, I'll go die in a pit now" (He actually does sort of get betrayed, his only friend he just made a week ago was just using him.)
Lincoln: "Surprising I didn't see that coming, I'll have to adjust my plans then.."
Harli: He'd start crying.
Oscar: He'd start punching and wouldn't stop till he passes out. (He's weak so his punches don't really hurt)
Landers: Aw, but can we still be friends?"
The Prince: "Oh, idiotic living being, I never trusted you, you're just proving me right"

@Williamnot group

Felix is a god of luck, and gods don't age, but they can be killed. He's been around for a long time, but he's still a friend little child of chaos.
He gets betrayed by someone close, let me set up the scene though.

Around them was a large industrial area. It had clearly abandoned for a while, as was the nature of Hell. They were on a suspended steel walkway, too wide to be a catwalk. Most of the rails had fallen away into the deep pit of murky water beneath them.

Missy, the character that has betrayed Felix and Jarrod stands in the middle of the catwalk. "Don't come any closer" She says. She's holding a knife.

"Come on Missy, you wouldn't hurt me!" Felix replies, walking forward. Missy and Felix had been dating for some time before this. "After all, it's me! Felix! Let's talk about this!"

He steps too close. "I said don't come any closer!" Missy shouts, and stabs Felix in the gut.

Felix steps back a bit, then to the side, twisting to reveal the knife to Jarrod. Missy's hand is still on the handle, and she looks shocked. Felix just looks her in the eyes, any warmth that had previously been there draining from them.

"Et tu, Brute?" He says. Missy takes a step back, letting go of the knife now, but Felix takes two steps closer, getting right up next to her. He puts a hand on her shoulder, pulling her down to his height, and whispers in her ear.

"Then. fall. Caeser." With that, he stumbles back and falls off the walkway into the water below, sinking beneath the surface.

As the god of luck, he has a few tricks up his sleeve. He actually used up most of his magic to make sure he wasn't mortally injured, then once he was in the water he used the last bit of his energy to teleport away, getting himself to the hospital.

He's a drama queen.

@stolenbrocoli group

Dani : run away, trust no one until she forgets that she trusts no one and starts trusting again

Garret: "i knew all along" even though he didn't know all along and he often wrongly places his cynicism

@Eon

Levi: "You little bitch! You're gonna f-cking pay for this! (he pauses for a moment and his voice tones down into more of a whisper) I trusted you… (His eyes begin to water, and tears fall but you can hardly tell if they are from anger or sadness.)

Luca: (Sits down so that he doesn't loose his balance) "This was always coming wasn't it? This entire time, you were just waiting for this day to get away from me, huh? You never really enjoyed being around me and you were just using me to get what you wanted. Damn. . . F-ck my life, I'm I right?" (half-hearted laugh, still attempting to make the situation less serious and awkward.)

Pascal: "You say that as if you think I didn't know. You were always under suspicion and I never trusted you. Go away now, I'm trying to think."

Nicholas: (takes a moment to register) "I don't care if you hurt me, but if you lay a finger on Levi or Luca I swear to the gods I will make you regret every single life choice that led you here. Now. Get out of my sight before I kill you right here."

Amber: "Interesting." (keeps her cool although on the inside she's overwhelmed and about to break out into tears.)

Ashlynn: "Okay, so I understand the whole betrayal part . . . but can we still be friends?"

Vector: "I figured as much. Your soul is plagued with darkness. Your heart is a crumbling piece of stone. Never once have I laid eyes on such a foul creature whom has stooped to your level of such diabolical evil. I may not have my Eyes of the Future, but by the way your poison-coated words slithered off your tongue, me, a blind, powerless god, could feel a corruption within your soul."

(Ah, Vector, such a dramatic and poetic god.)

@Relsey

Azizia: Guards, to the dungeon with this one, I haven't the time to deal with their schemes. Turns with a swish of her skirt, a single tear rolling down her other wise stoic face
Cador: I know! I've been waiting for you to spring this on me for the past week, your speech was a little lacking, would you like some pointers? My Intel tells me you're planning this whole revolution but you're not gaining any followers with that monologue.
Lilly: No… You wouldn't… you didn't… Why? Cries

@LilMeme group

Asumi: But… I thought… I t-thought I could trust you…
Kage: …I-I… I should've known…
Eri: So, You lied to me… faked your way into here and used us all as pawns, I'll give you props for waiting this long and for giving me the proper evidence to your little scheme
Collin: Wait… but… why
Mikoto: (tearing up) W-why does this always happen to me….
Hanaki: W-why me? Is this for someone else? If that's the case, you don't to go down their path. We can go back to w-what we used to be…
Emiko: You dirty mongrel, I going to make you regret breating
Unzari: I should expected this, I did said "Take what you need.", didn't I
Hikari: I shouldn't known I failed to check a spot, You're paying with your life for this
Minato: You… YOU VILLAIN! I'M KILLING YOU FOR THIS!

@Fairlyodd

Leaoni: I see you have chosen death.

Varian: Well, not that i ever cared for you either, but i will now make it my personal mission to ensure karma burns your very soul, you insolent, son of a - !

Sana: (tears up)
Everyone else, appearing behind her with weapons raised: You have five seconds to take that back.

@Guapeton group

Jay: (He'd probably break and lose control and wipe out anything within a 10 mi radious) he hehe hehahehahahHaheHAHAHAHAHAHAH WHAT A TIME TO BE ALIVE!!! YOU GOT TILL I COUNT TO 5 TILL YOUR ASS IS GRASS AND I HOPE YOU THINK YOU CAN FIGHT
Marshle: Well ok, that was completely uncalled for.
Adam: REPENT TO ME!!!!
Gianna: kills them and drinks a bottle of hennsy with jay until she passes out in his arm while crying and making him promise not to ever leave her and to never die so she can always stay with him.
Camile: Breakdown run away
Scarlet: Wait for the moment they feel say and slowly start making their life a living hell.

@Kefi

Literally all of my characters are constantly betraying each other. Also, reading these threads gives me life XD

@kiley_arrants Premium Supporter

Kenna: Very emotionally unstable, would 100% try to murder them. She would throw things. It'd be a temper tantrum, and a mess. But once the anger subsides, she'd be really upset and would probably cry about it for days.

Acyn: "Oh." He'd just be in shock forever. He wouldn't have any idea how to react. He'd be upset, but would want to reason with the persons choice. He would want to still believe they're a good person, even if they're not. He'd be confused, and more hurt than angry.

Caspian: Would kill them. Wouldn't even be upset. He'd just kill them because someone has to do it, and he doesn't want it to be Kenna.

Nakoa: He would have already seen it coming, and he would be mad. He'd make their life hell. Depending on the severity, he might not kill them and just let them go. He would try to see both sides, figure out why they did it, then make a decision on what to do.

Keres: She doesn't trust anyone, so. But she'd just kill them. Wouldn't think twice about it either.

Tanith: She'd get a bunch of information on the person, then sell it to a high bidder, and let them take care of it.

Eira: She probably wouldn't even notice, or care. She knows she can still get away with whatever, and kill anyone who comes after her. She'd be chilling. She probably didn't trust them to begin with.

@Abbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Brey- A R S O N
Naku- Two outcomes, either rethinks life choices or screams until they cry
Pylam- Is hurt, but just removes them from his life
Hayba- Manages to make the person feel bad
Elest- They broke his heart. steal their heart
Adim- Probably would have seen it coming, but if not would break a bone or two
Akolie- damit not again

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ooo development time uhhhhhh

aeolus - he'd probably take it the worst. he's spent a lot of his time learning to trust others again and if that trust were to be broken, ohh heck it'd probably knock him back to square one in that regard. he'd be a mess.
iro - he'd be pissed. like, he'd be mad. he's a very loyal and dedicated person himself and to have what he values most in people twisted like that would just make him angry, but not the vengeful or malicious angry; he'd be happy that whoever betrayed him was out of his life.
dallas - they'd be an idiot to betray a medic, and she knows that. she'd use her position against that person and if they ever come to her for medical treatment, she'd make their time in her medbay the most inconveniencing and uncomfortable situation ever. she wouldn't hurt them, but she'd let them know the entire time that she's not happy with them. at all.
bishop - she'd move on after a bit. the betrayal would definitely hurt her, but she's, in a way, used to people coming and going like that, and she'd probably just hunker down in her workroom and take her emotions out on a project.
aethex - he wouldn't take it well either, would probably end up blaming himself for it and go to dallas for help; he'd have no idea how to even process something like that. whoever betrayed him should definitely worry about dallas – she could handle a betrayal on her own, but if anyone thought to hurt aethex like that she'd have someone's head on a pike.

@kingnocedas group

kacey: she'd be deeply hurt and upset, and become an emotional mess for quite a while before getting over it. "you lied to me! i trusted you and you lied to my face!"
nabila: she would be disappointed but not entirely surprised. if she's by herself, she might shed a tear or two but on the outside she'd harden and become ice-cold. "mark my words, bitch, you won't see the last of me. i'll make your life a living hell."
karuko: people would think she wouldn't be upset but she'd actually take offence. she'd let out steam by vandalising that person's property, but deep down she'd be blaming herself and wondering what she did wrong for that person to betray her. "okaaaaay, that one stung."

@jeweleopard group

This happens to one of my characters. Her sister betrays her, so she goes and does the one thing her sister had told her not to do-become a dragon rider.

@AuroraStorm

A serious betrayal? Well…
Zara: Depends who. If it was Daisy, goes insane and kills everyone. If it was anyone else, goes Very Overprotective over Daisy and runs away with her.
Daisy: Attempts to Power of Friendship them by reminding them of everything they shared. Does not give up. If she eventually had to admit defeat (maybe they died), she would either break so much she couldn't function or become a different person, doing slightly morally wrong things in the name of saving lives.
Niara: If it was Phoenix, starts an elaborate master plan to kill her. Otherwise, goes back to, living alone, constantly travelling, and resolves never to trust again.
Phoenix: lol die
Yeah, some of mine really could not deal with that in any good way. Really a good thing it doesn't happen. (knock on wood, my stories have a tendency to get wildly out of my control)

@amber_is_in_a_loop

Lysia: screams, goes on a rampage
Yanni: expression goes blank After everything I did for you.
Kohmir: anger then evil grin you better run
Diego: cries Leave me, please
Dorota: confused for a second well, that's unexpected. I'm going to go now. See you in a couple weeks when I come to kill you.

@Musical_Queen

I feel like my character would go numb but she feels like she didn't deserve them and that it would be coming soon anyways until 2 of my other characters would try and build her back together

Dani Jean McGhee

Oooh my turn! This is actually part of the plot! Get ready for…..SCRIPT!

Lawrence:oh…can you repeat that I don't think I heard you correctly.

Gerda:ha no buddy you heard me I'm leaving our little "friend group".

Jo: Welp this is what I get for leaving my room huh…it was nice knowing you I guess guys.

Dean: wait you can't all leave, please I can't do this alone…I need help…I need.

Gerda:you needed a lot of things any you never did anything. This whole trip was a waste of time, you are all a bunch of idiots.

Jo: sigh Dean, Lawrence don't you think it's time to rest now, we've come so far.

Lawrence: NO, WE HAVE TO STICK TOGETHER, I DON'T WANT TO GO BACK PLEASE!

Gerda: all you ever do is want.

Gerda and Jo leave, both going separate ways and not even looking back, Dean finally woke up, he realised the hell that he put his friends through and with one final sigh he sat down. the magic inside of him fading slowly but much more painful than before.

Dean: I suppose I'll get to see Ty again soon huh ren ren.

All Dean could see now was a peaceful darkness, he had gotten what he had longed for. for so many years but was it all worth it?

Lol this is what happens when you have a narcissist a pessimist a delusional mental ward patient and a depressed boi go on an adventure together.

@Rabbi_Arsonist group

Milaka:
To her it would be Levi, Levi lost his mom and she always wanted a brother. So to him, Milaka is like a mother and to her Levi is like a brother. he would never purposely betray her, so in this case, let's say a reisu took him over;
…It's alright friend… rest now… and with that, she ending his short life as she smiled softly.

Levi:
Same thing, it's Milaka;
….I loved you… he would just stand there, and if she attempted to attack: goodbye… mama…

Lisha:
No one- well not that she remembers, it's really Abree, Milaka & Levi. She just doesn't believe it.

Abree:
Her friends- She can't take them all on at once.. So she'd accept her fate…
Sigh, there is no use to save you huh?… they just started running at her okay then.. thanks for this life..

Loki:
It's Adelaide. She switched sides… why? No reason;
YOU DARE BETRAY ME? at first, there are no signs of sadness. Kinda broke her heart, until… Y-you will d-DIE..! he yelled as tears flooded down his face. And with that, he had no option but to kill. With a single glace, she got emotions thrown at her. She was his spouse… without hesitation, he was next to her in a millisecond and chopped her head off quickly. Giving her a painless death. Rest well.. my dear.. as he fell to his knees.

Adelaide:
The only way he would betray her is if he died;
L-loki…? Dear? she would just stand there in disbelief, who was strong enough to kill him? She would run to him and fall on her knees begging for him to stay with her. His eyes were dull and his heartrate… was almost gone. With a final smile the color in his eyes faded into pitch black and his body went limp. She cried out into the night and swore revenge on whoever did this. With this event, she would become the next lord of the Reisus.

@Mojack group

Kyrios
(Assuming it’s the worst type of betrayal, no chance of him forgiving the other)
This actually happens to him, and it’s his main driving instinct for his primary story.
Kyrios shows off that he never forgives. He’ll dedicate his life to hunting down the traitor - even at the cost of losing himself by the end of it (which does happen in his story. by the end of it, he does have his revenge - but loses his humanity, both on the inside and outside). However he’s not 100% hellbent on revenge - but it’s very high up there.
TLDR; very very mad, will kill the traitor and ensure they never return to life ever again

Siirawyn
Silent breakdown, ‘shuts down,’ so to speak. It’s more of a chance for the traitor to take their leave - not to keep taunting him. Probably has trouble dealing with it at first, refusing to believe it - him shutting down is him repeating everything that he’s done with this person, each memory - all of it. Processing it. why would they do that?
then, as if a switch turns on, hunts down the traitor. would dedicate years of his (immortal, ageless) life to find this traitor just to fight them. Depending on a number of factors, he’d either curse them or just kill them.
i guess hunting your traitors runs in the family?
TLDR; goes very quiet, tries to understand why, snaps, hunts down traitor to beat them up