forum hey can you judge my character? thank you
Started by @sharkfinn_ey
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@unidrago

Well, personally, I think you have written too much. By that I mean that you have presented so many different aspects of him that it's hard to understand that it's only one person. Maybe try to focus on some specific things, such as his hobby with candles, his cat, and also his interactions, especially considering he is autistic, which, to be honest, I believe should be mentioned somewhere higher than the notes tab. From there you can introduce his insecurities, when it comes to interacting with people mostly, and then his habits and eccentricities as well. I think what I really want to say is you should try to organize him, as a character and as a personality, better.

@sharkfinn_ey

Honestly i didn't know where to put the autistic tab, because like, someone's not autistic, but they have autism (disorder/mental illness does not make personality) and it didn't feel right to put it under personality.

I'll try and put it in a more organized order, thanks for that tip! but i wonder, what do you think of him besides that?

@unidrago

He seems like a likable character, and I particularly like some of his habits, like sleeping with the lights on and with multiple blankets. Weird characteristics such as those make characters seem very realistic, cause it shows that they too do those weird things that are unique to everyone. I am not completely sure how he stands with the other characters, but I appreciate how you have shown that he is not only interested in getting over his past, but also has some people now that he cares about and messes around with.

kalhi

oh my gosh. I fell in love with the character right away. Ya his personalities seemed jumbles but it will come along into the story. I can tell he's someone beautiful and full of love. Please let me know what becomes of him!!