I know I've spent a lot of time on this character, but I'd like a second set of eyes because I know if my character isn't written well then my full writing won't be understandable. So if y'all could point out any confusing points or flaws I'd really appreciate it. Thanks! :) https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/247657#gallery_panel
I would love to check out your character, but the link wouldn't work, it just took me back to the home page
The link isn't working but if you could get another link I would be glad to check it out
The link didn't work but I would love to check it out.
Sorry, I didn't check it. Does this one work?? Sorry… Dmitri Airen
Are you sure you made it public? it's probably still on private and don't worry it's okay
Oh, sorry! I thought I had made it public. I forgot, but I changed it so it should work now
This is a very well thought out and in-depth character, so much so I don't believe that there's anything I could really find that could help you with him. I love all of the details you've used and it really shows that you understand this character a lot and that's really cool. If you really want help with something you can totally point it out and I can try my best to help you! I really do like this character though.