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Started by @SapphireMoondancer The World

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Hey, can I get an opinion on an antagonist for a story/game? (P.S. currently working on a picture to add in)

What makes her the antagonist? What are her motivations that make her an antagonist and what is her goal? Does she interfere with the protagonist's goals?

These are things to think about! You probably have an idea of all of these but I didn't see it on her plan so I wasn't sure :3


I'd put in a bit more, wanting to be loved and noticed enough is a good motivation for a villain but exploring how she tries to achieve this and and how she opposes the protagonist helps make a good villain! I think its because there isn't much in the history section its hard for me as on outsider to picture exactly who she is and why these are her motivations so giving a quick description of why she is the way she is would be amazing!