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@NoValdezinator

On the first look she seems awesome, but just for understanding: do Pokemon exist in your universe? I'm not sure if I got this right. Also I would like to know why her hair is purple, why did she get drugs and why did they leave her in the forest?
Besides that she is great!

@The Seliph-loving Gryffindor who also loves dragons and cats

1: Yeah, Pokemon do exist in the universe AMJ is a Pokemon fanfiction. 2: Pokemon characters have unnatural hair colors anyway. 3: Luna's older sister wanted her to forget all the pain Luna went through, so she drugged Luna to forget what happened. 4: Luna was entrusted to a Tapu Lele who had to keep Luna's past secret, so she raised Luna with a Litten she found until Luna was around 8 years old, then the Prism Cult, which worships Necrozma, came for Luna. The Tapu Lele had to leave Luna in a secret forest in Melemele Island where the Cult of Necrozma couldn't find her. 5: Thanks for the critique! :3