forum Could someone critique my character?

Started February 20, 2018 by Gisela

tune

Invalid Character Here she is! Any comments would be helpful, I am an inexperienced writer and would love any critiques.

It's very interesting! I like her, although I am curious as to what 3 languages she speaks

She seems really great and well known ! Keep her that way and never forget what are her wishes and you'll have an amazing character ! ;)

She seems like a very well-thought-out character and she's very believable. Good job!