forum Character feedback?

Started January 15, 2018 by @CinnamonRoll

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Wow. I'm starting to get obsessed with these. I'm just gonna keep spamming characters because this is SO HELPFUL!!
Ok, the latest:

Feel free to roast me to the ground!!

[Grabs torch]

[Unscrews cap of gasoline bottle]

In all honesty, though, I like her a lot! She has enough of a background to make her a compelling character, and characters that are strongly driven by inner emotions like anger and revenge are the ones that I personally find the most interesting.

Ahh yay!! I took a lot of time delving into her past so I'm so glad you like her!! :DD

Starting off strong. Prostitution, Death, EXCITEMENT! [Says in a Honest Trailers Voice]
Just kidding. Love the backstory. ^-^

Lol, what's with Demon Priestesses and hidden artistic talents?

Okay, and if she's an athletic 5'9'', then she should be around 140lbs or so. (I'd maybe make it a bit higher? idk.)

Wow. That's only a few. Good job! ^-^ (Maybe it's because my brain's getting ready for "sit down and binge K-Dramas" mode, and I just didn't catch anything. Oh well. XD)

Aww I love my artsy satanic chicas <3

Thank the lord for weight feedback–I struggle so much.

I'm honestly about to have a stroke!! I'm so glad that y'all think she's so good!! Thank you!!!!

You are more than welcome. ^-^ Happy writing!

Edit: I just randomly assumed that you were female I'm so sorry don' kill me. [holds up torch in defense]