forum Character critique anyone?
Started by @SapphireMoondancer The World

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Ooh! Nice character (and really cool name)! She seems like she has a lot of hobbies. Does she pick them up along the way or have them already? Also, what are the Voids? Even on the page it's kind of vague. Yet withdrawn and calloused and willing to do the right thing even if she has to be the bad guy? Sounds like the story could take a couple of very interesting turns with that. I don't know what you're really wanting, but if you'd like to discuss ideas, I'm always willing to talk about characters! (if you'd like/need to, feel free to pm me to talk about characters, idc.)