forum Can someone help me write a back story?
Started by @Minette
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@Minette

I've been mulling over what kind of past my newest character should have. I have nearly every aspect of her fleshed out except for her backstory, and as a result, her personality is turning out to be a little flat without any past experiences to influence her.

I already know that I have no interest in giving her a family beyond her familiar (who is quite literally just a sentient cloud). She's meant to be isolated, mysterious, and naive of how society works. I even went as far as to say that she has trouble with verbal communication, reading, and writing skills. On top of all that, she's a (humanoid) kirin! Like most kirins, she's very peaceful, stoic, and almost hedonistic. Her greatest passions are life (animals, people, etc.), happiness, adventure, and magic.

She clashes with unempathetic, snarky, cold and calculated personalities. As a kirin, she has a vast and almost innate understanding of magic and the nature of the world, but on the same token one of her biggest flaws is a - lack - of understanding; careers, politics, money, authority, rules, society, and social structures are completely beyond her.

This character is designed for roleplay so I want to avoid backstories that assume too much about the world or limit other players (like saying she's the last kirin in existence). With all of that in mind, does anyone have tips or ideas?

@al4kore

Maybe your character was separated from the public for a lot of her life? That would explain a lot of her personality, such as the communication/reading/writing struggle as well as her naivety and misunderstanding of how the world works. It may also explain how she doesn't do well with the personality you described, as she would be may be more familiar with nature, or animals?

@Samoyed

Maybe she just wasn't raised with a strong sense of these things. Since her species clashes with the cold points in life, maybe she grew up in the country with literally just legit nothing really to do. So she just never questioned it since it was never taught to her

@SenselessPen

I agree with Caterdip, that she was isolated. Like her species had all of this information, but didn't want to explore the vase world because of what they learned. I'm bad at writing backstories as well, but i love the idea that you have with your character. (i don't know if this is too specific or not)

@melreadstoomuch

She sounds like a good candidate for flashbacks to childhood. Maybe an old, morally ambiguous but wise kirin drew her away from the larger part of society to refine her skills?