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Started by @Stroylia-Knight
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@Stroylia-Knight

Ok, So, you give me one of your characters(Link or you can explain them) and I will do 8 bars about that character(Bar is a line for a rap) If you like the bars and you want more, I can try to write a rap about that character. Any character is allowed and btw I will not curse normally, I will do &%^* and stuff like that.

@Stroylia-Knight

@salem66 Hope you like it, tell me if I need to change anything and if you want another character done then just ask.

Verse 1
I'm a star, I'm a Diamond
I'm Bizarre from all this Excitement
Don't mess with me or my brother
or I will bring the Motherf**king Thunder
I may be younger but I'm full of wonder
I will pull the sword out of life. Call it Excalibur
I may be happy doesn't mean I'm not full of Anxiety
Biting my nails, pulling my hair
I have so many Fails but I'm not Scare
Magical Doctor will help anyone from their Physical Disaster
I may not be filled with Political anger but I'm an Eternal Commander
5'8 is my height but I will still bring the fright and a shining light
I have temper you could say, I'm a helper to you if you stay
I'm not Sinister and I'm not from the UK

Chorus
Things in the sky, Simplify and Multiply
Identify as a Star and I will make my Family(JOESTARS) Satisfy
I will shin and bring light because tonight I will be Shining Like a Star
Shining like a Star
Rhyming like a True Joestar
Swinging like the Avatar
HEY HEY HEY HEY
SHINING LIKE A STAR
RHYMING LIKE A TRUE JOESTAR
SWINGING LIKE THE AVATAR
SHINING SHINING SHINING LIKE A STAR
RHYMING RHYMING RHYMING LIKE A TRUE JOESTAR
SWINGING SWINGING SWINGING LIKE THE AVATAR
SHINING SHINING SHINING LIKE LIKE LIKE A A A STAR

Verse 2
I'm a freelance artist
I'm not going to relapse because I'm the Smartest
I will use this pocket knife,
like a cosmic strike
I will be reborn like a Phoenix
so I can get rid of all my Demons
I'm a Protagonist like my Family
You will be punished into a Tragedy
I'm rapping my Bohemian Rhapsody
The only reason I need is because of my shining Personality
I'm a campaigner
I'm as strong as a Hammer
Curious to see what happens to you
Jealous because you didn't live up to anything my dude
This is turning into a Bizarre Adventure
I'm will be a Superstar Ancestor
A Vanguard Grandmaster
The new Mozart with Swagger
A Sweetheart with a Dagger

Chorus
Things in the sky, Simplify and Multiply
Identify as a Star and I will make my Family (JOESTARS) Satisfy
I will shin and bring light because tonight I will be Shining Like a Star
Shining like a Star
Rhyming like a True Joestar
Swinging like the Avatar
HEY HEY HEY HEY
SHINING LIKE A STAR
RHYMING LIKE A TRUE JOESTAR
SWINGING LIKE THE AVATAR
SHINING SHINING SHINING LIKE A STAR
RHYMING RHYMING RHYMING LIKE A TRUE JOESTAR
SWINGING SWINGING SWINGING LIKE THE AVATAR
SHINING SHINING SHINING LIKE LIKE LIKE A A A STAR

HEY HEY HEY HEY
SHINING LIKE A STAR
RHYMING LIKE A TRUE JOESTAR
SWINGING LIKE THE AVATAR
SHINING SHINING SHINING LIKE A STAR
RHYMING RHYMING RHYMING LIKE A TRUE JOESTAR
SWINGING SWINGING SWINGING LIKE THE AVATAR
SHINING SHINING SHINING LIKE LIKE LIKE A A A STAR

@Stroylia-Knight

@salem66 Thanks and no problem :D BTW I ask everyone I write for but What was your fav. part of the rap. I personally like the Chorus the most

@Stroylia-Knight

@salem66 Oh, I'm glad you like it, When you are done with your character, I can write another one with more bars than this one, and Ya, there were a lot of changes in the making of the rap. I wrote the whole rap then I realize that I didn't say a thing about the Joestars. So i was like, OH F$&%

@Stroylia-Knight

@salem66 Here you go again and I don't know how to feel about this, I think it's my the worse of any rap I have ever done. I think because I'm tried af lol but hope you like it

[Verse 1]
Hickory, Dickory, Dock.
Bloody, Hungry, Clock
For Master DIO, I will Splatter these Neos
Hickory, Dickory, Dock
I may be 5 feet and 1 inch but I will Beat and make you twitch
I serve God Himself and you are going to end up with Burns on yourself
Every second flow to countdown
and I may be having a Meltdown
Do you hear the Ticking
or do you hear the Ripping
I'm not shining like a Star
but I'm Biting like a Bizarre Rockstar
I hate the Joestars with every Inch of my Body
I will turn them into Zombies
People say I have Narcissistic disorder
But their Existed is Torture

[Chorus]
Tick Tock
Trick Clock
You're going to feel the Minutes Stop
Pendulum swings, Side to side
Escapin' you Things or your Pride will make you Die

TICK TICK TICK
YOU BETTER RUN RUN RUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
THIS GOING TO BE FUN FUN FUN
TICK TICK TICK
GET OUT OF THE SUN SUN SUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
COME OUT YOU SCUM SCUM SCUM

TICK TICK TICK
YOU BETTER RUN RUN RUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
THIS GOING TO BE FUN FUN FUN
TICK TICK TICK
GET OUT OF THE SUN SUN SUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
COME OUT YOU SCUM SCUM SCUM

[Verse 2]
What's wrong, You scared
Aren't Strong, Get out of the Snare
I have power like DIO
Coward Louder if you want to be let go
I'm a Vampire
That will never Expire or Retire
An entrepreneur is what I am
Not Sculpture for your hands
I'm more dangerous than Worthless Naruto
Because My Tailed Fox don't give an F%&k
I'm Bold and Original
You're going to Fold from that Pitiful look
I'm glad that I have Delilah
Can I get a Motherf##ka' Hallelujah

[Chorus]
Tick Tock
Trick Clock
You're going to feel the Minutes Stop
Pendulum swings, Side to side
Escapin' you Things or your Pride will make you Die

TICK TICK TICK
YOU BETTER RUN RUN RUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
THIS GOING TO BE FUN FUN FUN
TICK TICK TICK
GET OUT OF THE SUN SUN SUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
COME OUT YOU SCUM SCUM SCUM

TICK TICK TICK
YOU BETTER RUN RUN RUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
THIS GOING TO BE FUN FUN FUN
TICK TICK TICK
GET OUT OF THE SUN SUN SUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
COME OUT YOU SCUM SCUM SCUM

TICK TICK TICK
YOU BETTER RUN RUN RUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
THIS GOING TO BE FUN FUN FUN
TICK TICK TICK
GET OUT OF THE SUN SUN SUN
CLICK CLICK CLICK
COME OUT YOU SCUM SCUM SCUM