So this is the main character of a project I've been working on lol. She's a big work in progress so there's a few important fields left blank, but I'd still love to get some critiques on her before I go real in depth w the story and everything… Viera Deltania …thank u
i should be writing an essay right now but oh well :) lessgo
okay side note this character is actually p good and im definitely taking a stretch w these
Alright, it says she loves speaking her mind and is often appearing open, but she never talks of her emotions and often shuts them down, which might be slightly contradicting.
In the politics section, you say anarchy is her preferred lifestyle, but your description of the world she lives in implies that there are laws, therefore implying a government. Anarchy is a state of society under no government. If living under a chaotic government is Viera's preffered lifestyle, then tyranny would be a good description to use. If Viera prefers no government, then calling her an anarchist is the right wording, but you might have to alter the description of the chaotic world she grew up in :)
(also this is probably bc ur working on it, but if Viera is non-religious, there could be a reason behind it/she could be agnostic or atheist, or she could just be completely unaware of religion altogether, depending on her story, haha.
anyway that's all i could find. I love the character, and I love the world you're setting up in her character setup!
@Aloe Vera thanks for the critique :)
I knew I wanted to make Viera a character w some inner conflict, but you're so right about that bit. Now that I look back that's actually really contradictory lol
Thanks so much for the rest of your recommendations! There's a few inconsistencies with my world building right now because I keep switching things up… so I'll be sure to fix them soon hahah