forum Art critique and feedback
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@moss

https://ibb.co/XZFBvdN
hey!! i would love some critique on this!! i had a struggle drawing this LMAO (also im not sure how to post photos to this site so AHAH)

I love the lighting! Its dark but you can still see what's happening. Also the hands look great! For posting photos, just copy and paste the photo after u upload it.

@Fangirl616 group

I know that there are some things that need erasing, (and this is actually fanart), but, uh… how does it look?

(Also idk how to make the image smaller lol)

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The perspective of the faces look really good, but the anatomy is like, super wonky.

Your faces are tucked into the necks, which are slightly too big. That might be the trick of the angles, but their necks look TH I C C. I think drawing shoulders would help a lot, not only with the angles (i.e. one hanging over the other in a threatening way (massive shoulders help in this)), but maybe with how yourself is looking at it.

The only big fix I would make is their jaws, which again is listed above with just a picture. And no one’s jaw is that defined like, ever. They also sort of have same face syndrome?

But their emotions are great!

Also, foreheads are definitely a thing. Guys hate having hair on their foreheads (a lot of them, anyway). Without the defined forehead, they look like they have pill-shaped heads rather than a human-shaped one.

@Fangirl616 group

The perspective of the faces look really good, but the anatomy is like, super wonky.

Your faces are tucked into the necks, which are slightly too big. That might be the trick of the angles, but their necks look TH I C C. I think drawing shoulders would help a lot, not only with the angles (i.e. one hanging over the other in a threatening way (massive shoulders help in this)), but maybe with how yourself is looking at it.

The only big fix I would make is their jaws, which again is listed above with just a picture. And no one’s jaw is that defined like, ever. They also sort of have same face syndrome?

But their emotions are great!

Also, foreheads are definitely a thing. Guys hate having hair on their foreheads (a lot of them, anyway). Without the defined forehead, they look like they have pill-shaped heads rather than a human-shaped one.

Ok, thank you for the advice! I didn't even think about the necks, and now that you point it out, I can see how the jaws need work. I'll work on it!

(Seriously, thanks)

@Reblod flag

I don't think it's so bad.
Maybe take more time to let it dry and go over some parts a few more times to get a more opaque look. Referencing a day/stormy landscape wouldn't hurt either

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

low quality progress shot
am i going blind or does this look really, really, really hecking bad, especially compared to literally everything else I've ever drawn

please be honest cause i don't want to spend hours upon hours finishing it if it's not going to be worth the time

@ninja_violinist

I wouldn't say it looks "really hecking bad" at all, a lot of it looks fantastic, but there does seem to be some muddyness/overrendering with the skin tone from what I can tell? please take this with all the grains of salt you can imagine, but some of the transition tones, especially around the forehead and chin, seem slightly desaturated which gives her a bit of an ashy look.