forum Feedback Please
Started by @King-in-Yellow group

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@King-in-Yellow group

I need Feedback on a Doc I wrote for my Universe. Please scale it from 1 to 10 (1 bad and 10 good) and tell me what was your fav. part and what I need to fix

and here is my Universe. Please do the same thing as I said with the Doc


It has a pretty interesting plotline, I will say. There are grammatical errors, but don't be too hard on yourself for that, because it's a rough draft. If you want, I can give you more suggestions that will help your writing sound even more smooth than it is, for free, because it helps me edit my own writing as well and I actually do like helping fellow writers out. No hard feelings if you decline the offer though. Keep writing hun.