forum I got a boat!

Started September 19, 2018 by @Yamatsu

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I was looking for some critique on a location that I finished, and a better name would be nice.

Noice. The only thing that I noticed was that it's hard to tell what it is. Is it a river, a boat, a desert? Clarification on that would be nice.

What do you mean by a "River?" I made no mention of a river, and there are multiple parts saying that the Caravan is a sandship. Thank you for your critique, though!